Phew...Long time no see, everyone! !
A reminder from the front, most of this chapter is the author’s own reflections. If you don’t like it, you can skip it~
After all, the Zhuchuan chapter is much longer than the Li Jiahuan chapter. It took me so long to come up with a special chapter to talk about other things. (I don’t think it’s a water chapter, hehe~)
As of now, the first half of this novel is officially finished! ! (Applause, applause)
With your company, the stories of the first three capable people finally come to an end.
Tian Maolei, the youngest capable person who had a fateful encounter with Nexus and formed a deep bond to finally fight against Dark Zaki! ! ! (Applause, applause)
As the first competent person in this novel, he has 53 chapters! ! ! (Applause, applause)
But to be honest, the writing style in the early stage was still not very good, so the portrayal of Tian Maolei was very weak (although it is not good now), and because there were too many private goods hidden, it destroyed the early plot structure and failed to finish many things. (For example, Chen Long's matter was delayed until Li Jiahuan's chapter), and the various forms were not well coordinated, resulting in black adulthood having no sense of existence at all...
Of course, it’s not a big problem. Let’s give a sneak peek. There will be a capable person who will use this form later. So what new performance will it have then? Stay tuned! !
What I want to introduce next is——
A tender young man who has a dream as free as a bird, pursues it with all his strength, is not afraid of hardships, bravely faces powerful enemies, and overcomes the darkness (Hey, hey, hey, where can I see tenderness!): Li Jiahuan! ! (Applause, applause)
He wrote a whole 32 wonderful chapters! ! (Certainly the least of the three fitters, both in terms of chapters and total word count)
To be honest, I still feel very regretful, because the original concept did not think too much, which resulted in Li Jiahuan's chapter being full of "instrumentality", such as filling in holes for Tian Maolei's chapter, leading to Beria and Agni. The new characters also include the foreshadowing for the Zhichuan chapter, so the descriptions of Li Jiahuan are very few, even not as good as Tian Maolei. (Li Jiahuan: Me...)
But... (Ah, yes, I have to force myself to comfort myself again)
Li Jiahuan’s chapter is not without merit! For example, the chapters of Super Pigeon are based on the episode of the same name in Ultraman Ace. It is my first attempt to add a unit drama in the series mode. Judging from the final effect, I am quite satisfied! (Although it still feels a bit forced to be lyrical...)
Let’s talk about the form again. Originally, he should have appeared directly in the dream adult form at the beginning. The green adult form was originally assigned to Tian Maolei, but after thinking about it carefully, I felt that in that case (Tian Maolei’s) protagonist’s halo would be too It was too heavy, so he was castrated, but he couldn't live without this form, so he gave it to Li Jiahuan as a matter of course. It's very reasonable, right? (Li Jiahuan: It’s reasonable!)
If I had the chance to do it again (I think I won’t), then I would definitely give Li Jiahuan more scenes and try my best to portray this young man chasing his dreams. He is not suffering from a terminal illness like Qian Shurei, but he also has the courage to chase his dreams. , Dreams are something that everyone should have. They can be big or small. As long as you chase your dreams, everything can change! ! (Hey, is there no logic at all?)
So, what I want to talk about next is the chapter that has just ended, transforming from the darkness and being chosen by the light, fighting for redemption, fierce battle with Dark Zaki, Dark Zaki: NND, everyone is going to talk about me, right? ), and get to know their true love, and write a perfect (Hirakawa: I almost died, you call this perfect?) life - Mitsuhiko Hirukawa! ! ! ! (Applause, applause)
Hiruchawa Mitsuhiko wrote the last wonderful chapter of the first half - a total of 47 chapters of glorious achievements! ! The number of words in his chapter is the most among the three competent writers! ! (After all, the average chapter is 4,000+) The final chapter surpassed the 9,500 words of Tian Maolei's chapter and the 9,300 words of Li Jiahuan's chapter, reaching an astonishing 15,000 words! ! !
This is also a huge challenge for me. I originally planned to end it at Chapter 131, which means that the original word count should be over 20,000 words. However, my class on Wednesday was fully booked from morning to night. , I couldn't spare much time, so I managed to write only 9,000 words at night. In the end, I had no choice but to separate the chapters again and end them the next day. (My eyes are so dry and swollen... Wuwu...)
Ahem, I went a bit far. I actually put a lot of effort into the Hirukawa chapter. It can be said that I was more serious than the Tian Maolei chapter. I really thought about trying to change the scumbag character of Hirukawa Mitsuhiko in Menbius. There are many methods (although they are still not very effective), and at the same time, characters such as Sanada Rumi, Matsuno Saburo, Hiraga Shinya, and Date Shota are created, adding more highlights to the story (actually there are not).
It's indeed a lot better than my original idea that only centered on Jiuchuan, but it also has some regrets.
First of all, the final battle did not allow Zhichuan to end everything. I personally feel that this is indeed a failure, especially unfair to Zhichuan, which resulted in this situation:
Tian Maolei: "In my final chapter, I fought against Hypaseton, gained a new form, and retired with success!"
Li Jiahuan: "In my final chapter, I fought against Hildras, gained a new form, and became famous!"
The two looked towards Zhichuan River.
Hiruchuan: "I...I didn't have a new form in the final chapter, uh...I almost died..."
"Huh--"
…
This is indeed my problem, because the original idea was for Tian Maolei to end everything, so Mitsuhiko Hirochawa's exit was doomed from the beginning, which is indeed not safe...
But don’t worry, this won’t happen again!
Let me tell you a little more quietly. The original idea was that Hiruchuan passed the light to Tian Maolei before he died. Because at that time, I had no intention of adding characters like Liu Mei. When I started writing, I couldn't help but ask myself: "This is my own work." The child you created, how can you give up!!!"
Under constant condemnation of conscience, he finally made the decision not to sacrifice Mitsuhiko Hirukawa.
To make some digressions, there was no intention to add the role of Mitsuhiko Hirugawa at the beginning. The third suitable person should be Jun Himeya. He was also the one who became Dark Mephistopheles (Himeya: Moque). It was General It is set as a co-soul in parallel time and space, as a reverse tribute, to achieve the effect of Ji Yazhun - Ji Yazhun, Qianshu Rei - Li Jiahuan, Gumen Yihui - Tian Maolei, but after careful consideration, I felt that this would ruin my image as a potential brother, so I changed the name to Mitsuhiko Hirukawa. (Zhichuan: I am the substitute for co-writing)
Therefore, we can see many things similar to Brother Zhun from Mitsuhiko Hirukawa, such as the red adult form at the beginning, the battle with Dark Mephistopheles, etc. The two of them happened to be reporters in the past, so they are very familiar at once. Is that reasonable? (Zhichuan: You fart!!)
After careful consideration, I felt that it needed to have its own characteristics in the Hiruchuan chapter, so I added a series of characters such as Rumi, which not only enriched the world view, but also tested the water (referring to the romance aspect) for future creations.
But I still regret that the two people still didn't have a formal mouth-to-mouth kiss. They only kissed on the face or forehead. How is this appropriate? ! (Ah, I definitely don’t mean to torture the dog)
Let’s talk about the concept of the final battle. In fact, I left a big hole for myself from the beginning. If I create based on the world of Mebius and want Mebius to return, how should I deal with it? Why not let the presence of Mebius affect the perception like Zero in the early stage of Geed?
It was originally planned to have Xiao Meng be injured after a battle in Li Jiahuan's chapter and be brought back (Beria would also go back together), but it was shelved due to various reasons, which led to the ending of both Menbius. Still on Earth, this would create a very embarrassing situation. If Nexus was to face Mebius alone, he would have to withdraw, and how to withdraw would become another problem.
Everyone has seen the answer sheet I handed over in the end, which is to let the father of Ultra come and take him and Beria away on the grounds of "no interference". To be honest, this reason is too far-fetched, and some people are forced to leave. Feel……
But after all, this is a big hole that I dug for myself from the beginning. If I can’t fill it, I have to jump into it with tears in my eyes! ! (Woo woo woo...)
There are actually abandoned plans for the final battle:
Plan one is to create a gap for Mebius when the Ultra Brothers attack Dark Domain G, let him and Hikari return to Earth as reinforcements, and then merge with GUYS so that the Phoenix Hero form can return, just like In the finale of Mebius, Zoffie and Nexus fought against Dark Zaki like that. After careful consideration, I decided to give up such an idea. After all, if it were really written like this, it would always feel like it would be a bit unobtrusive...
Option two, in the final battle between Nexus and Dark Zaki, there were multiple Neolight energy amplifiers. Of course, there were also amplifiers that amplified the light of the Ultra Brothers in space. Nexus separates seven adult forms in the phantom form, and attacks multiple amplifiers from all directions to achieve a more brilliant effect, or eight Nexus appear at the same time to fight the alien creatures of Dark Zaki. The Beast Legion, the reason why they gave up in the end——
If it were really written, it would be too much, and readers would easily be unable to read it. (Reader: You know it too!!)
But I will keep this skill and may use it again in subsequent chapters. This idea first came to me when I watched the finale of Orb in 2016. After all, Orb only summoned energy bodies to emit light. Secondly, The direct physical combat in the final of Geed in 2017 made me see the feasibility of doing so, so I settled on this skill early.
The last one is about Dark Zaki. To be honest, it still fails to create any sense of oppression. Even the sense of doomsday is not as good as that of Alfulis who plunged the world into the Ice Age...
Ah, of course you can’t blame me, it’s because he doesn’t look fierce to begin with (Forcing Shin to pass the blame)!
The two appearances in the main drama (Nexus TV and Galaxy Special) failed to show too much pressure (the kind where no one can escape until dark). The skill description looks scary but expressive. There is indeed a big difference, I can only say that I did my best...
Put his strength at a very high level, such as killing Hiruchuan instantly (Zhiruchuan: Are you polite?), but you must also give him a proper level, and you cannot let him be defeated easily, otherwise it will appear that he is not a good person. It’s too long (like the Nexus TV finale).
Therefore, it should be more reasonable to consider his final defeat as underestimating the enemy + being injured + the Ultra Brothers attacking the dark realm... (no confidence)
Of course, I can't let him leave just like that. After all, in order to pave the way for the subsequent story, I brought the Dark Shadow Mage over in advance, so that Zaki's reappearance in the future would be logical, without having to go through a long process like my original planning. The bloody plot (referring to the completely non-existent Emperor Kalafar) caused Nexus to lose his power and amnesia and then start over again...
I completely disagree with that plot, so I decided to delete it entirely and directly use the Dark Shadow Mage to introduce the following chapters to reduce the possibility of writing failure (actually I just can't control it).
In fact, I have never been very good at grasping the overall novel. In the beginning, I just wrote whatever came to my mind. Therefore, after I got serious about it, I had to work hard to fill in the holes for myself. Especially when I was writing the Hiruchuan chapter, I just had to write whatever I wanted. First, go back and read the previous chapters to see if there are any holes that have not been filled (I really wanted to curse myself at the time, why did I dig so many holes!)...
To be honest, I didn’t expect that I would be able to persist in writing until now. In fact, I have tried many times in the middle. The early manuscripts were all saved from the past, so the style is quite different from the current one. It even makes people feel that they were not written by one person. …
Li Jiahuan’s chapter was the biggest victim, and the shortest chapter took the longest time (it was delayed directly from the beginning of 2020 to the end of 2021, and there was no one else...). I almost forgot that I still had a novel to finish. But as soon as the announcement about the closure of Tangyuan Creation came out, I felt bad instantly. I felt that I had been wasting my time. The website was closed and I still hadn’t finished writing the novel. I was really ashamed...
So I secretly made up my mind to give myself and the readers an explanation! ! To this end, I will continue to work hard! ! !
So, at the end of the day, it is still indispensable, the theme song dedicated to Mitsuhiko Hiruchawa and Maolei Tian-"Hero". (Don’t rush through, there are Easter eggs behind!)
hero
Lyricist: Tokunaga Akihito
Composer: Tokunaga Akihito
Song: doa
カッコつけてるつもりで proudly
"I start to feel complacent because of the smallest things."
Put all the big things away and put them all away
"All important matters are thrown aside"
The self-divided self-divided self-divided bitterness is the bitter one.
"Torturing myself like a prisoner"
そんなServantTransformation!
"Say goodbye to yourself like this now Transformation!"
Dark and dark
"What to do if you are afraid of the dark"
アイツが灏てどうする
"I'm afraid of what to do with that guy"
footstepみしてるだけじゃ
"Don't take this step"
jinnana
"You can never move forward"
男ならWho かのために强くなれ
"A man should be strong for others"
歯を食いしばって 思いっきりkeeper り抜け
"Bite your teeth and persevere"
転んでもいいよ また立ち上がればいい
"It doesn't matter if you fall down, just stand up again"
ただそれだけ できれば
"As long as we can do this"
hero
"He is a hero"
Today's day
"I just feel like I have no energy today"
The sweet thing is the best thing to do
"I really hate myself for being naive and arrogant"
とりあえずは外（おもて）でTake a deep breath Update
"For now, go outside and take a deep breath to renew yourself."
そんじゃ神からしましょうかTransformation!
"Then let's start Transformation now!"
weak気になってどうする
"What should I do if I'm a coward?"
Tomorrow’s Lord?
"What will happen tomorrow?"
黙って下向いてちゃ
"Hold your head and say nothing"
smell
"Others will never understand"
男ならWho かのために强くなれ
"A man should be strong for others"
ぶつかり合って ejaculation cup やってみろ
"Compete against each other and give it your all and have a big fight"
cry いてもいいよ and smile
"It's okay to cry, just laugh again"
ただそれだけ できれば
"As long as we can do this"
hero
"He is a hero"
wow…
男ならWho かのために强くなれ
"A man should be strong for others"
女もそうさ 见てるだけじゃ开まらない
"It's the same with women. You can't start anything just by looking at it."
これが正しいって 言える勇気があればいい
"If you only have the courage to say "This is right""
ただそれだけ できれば
"As long as this can be done"
hero
"He is a hero"
男ならWho かのために强くなれ
"A man should be strong for others"
歯を食いしばって 思いっきりkeeper り抜け
"Bite your teeth and persevere"
転んでもいいよ また立ち上がればいい
"It doesn't matter if you fall down, just stand up again"
ただそれだけ できれば
"As long as we can do this"
hero
"He is a hero"
Ending credits:
"Future? How did you..." Looking up and seeing the familiar face walking into the command room, Long was very surprised and blinked to confirm again and again that he had seen it correctly.
The rest of the people were the same. Their hands stopped in mid-air and their eyes widened. The future was back! ! !
Wearing a team uniform in the future, he showed a handsome smile: "The captain gave me a two-day holiday and asked me to come back to Earth to have a look, and..."
He unfolded it to the side, and a figure dressed in black came into view, and once again shocked everyone's jaws: "Captain Serizawa!!!"
The happiest thing is the dragon, old friends meet again, the gentle eyes meet, everything is unspoken.
…
"Cheers!!!" A grill was set up and parasols were set up on the grass near the Ouli base, and everyone gathered together, drinking juice instead of wine, talking about "wine", and drinking wine. It was so uncomfortable! !
"Hey, hey, you guys, why didn't you notify me when you came out for a dinner?" Retired Toriyama was also invited over by Assistant Maru. He smiled kindly, and everyone made room for him with smiles and enthusiasm. The ground pulled him to sit down, and the newspaper in his hand fell off. Director Qishui looked at the laughing people, smiled slightly, picked up the newspaper on the ground, and looked at the article on it, he couldn't help but shed tears again in his eyes.
"Director," Mei Qixue came over with the roasted meat. Seeing him standing there blankly, she went over to take a look. She suddenly understood and sighed softly:
"If Tian Maolei is here, we might not be able to snatch him together..."
"yes……"
Thinking of the snack food, they all laughed to tears...
…
"The high school entrance examination is today, don't be nervous, take the test well!!" Li Jiaqi reminded her before going out.
"I got it~ you've been talking about it non-stop since the day before yesterday!" Li Jiahuan put his schoolbag on his back and shook his head helplessly. He went out and met the half-immortal at the station. The two of them extended their hands to say hello and got in the car together to rush to the test center. .
"Xiao Huanzi, are you nervous?" Banxian asked, but his legs were so nervous that they kept shaking.
"Hahaha, half-immortal, don't panic!!" Li Jiahuan smiled: "This is not like you, half-immortal, you usually don't panic at all!"
"This, this, this, this..." The half-immortal was so nervous that he stammered: "Xiao Huanzi, you don't know something. Yesterday I... watched the sky at night, and today it's not good for me!"
"Hahaha, don't panic! The worst we can do is repeat another year!" Li Jiahuan joked.
He looked to the side where Tian Maolei had been reserved, a trace of trance flashed in his eyes, and he temporarily stopped smiling.
"Classmate, is there anyone here?" At this time, a classmate from another class came to the side and asked politely.
"Uh..." Li Jiahuan came to his senses and breathed a sigh of relief: "No, please sit down!"
Looking at where he was sitting, Li Jiahuan raised the corners of his mouth slightly and turned to look out the window:
"Tian, if it were you, you must be more nervous than a half-immortal right now..."
"Everyone is embarking on a new journey now, do you see it?"
In the blue sky, the laughter and laughter of the three of them in the past seemed to emerge...
…
"This is your brother's memory monitor. It was sent from GREW GUYS JAPAN."
"Well..." Tian Maoling reached out and took the memory display with a red "V" pattern clumsily marked by her brother from the captain. This thing had long been damaged and could not be used, but Tian Maoling cherished it and looked at it. It's like seeing a younger brother...
"Okay, let's go out and patrol!"
"Yeah!!" She nodded, carefully put the broken memory display into the inner bag on her chest, picked up her helmet and followed the captain on patrol.
…
"Senior, hurry up, or you won't be able to catch up with the pancakes from that store!!" Rumi stood outside the door of the newspaper office and urged Hiruchuan.
"Okay, okay... I really can't do anything to you..." Hiruchuan picked up the satchel on the table, shook his head helplessly, and followed her out.
"Hurry up!!!" Rumi took Hirukawa's hand and led him to run away, making him almost fall to the ground and miserable: "Hey, hey, hey, I've just been discharged from the hospital anyway, you Slower!!!"
"It's been three days, stop pretending!!"
"Slow down..."
The voices of the two people that reached his ears became weaker and weaker. Matsuno smiled slightly, and Shinya lay on the table and fell asleep as usual.
Matsuno put down the newspaper, picked up the brewed tea and took a sip: "Well... it's really beautiful..."
On the newspaper on the table, the red headline stands out——
"Remember the hero, he is always by our side"
The illustration of the article is one of the few photos taken by GUYS people and Tian Maolei. Everyone in the photo is smiling sincerely. Looking to the end of the article, two familiar names come into view:
Reporter: Rumi Sanada
Editor: Hiruchawa Mitsuhiko
To be continued
