Discuss the plot and report on the current results~
Style:
Fantasy
Author:
Mr. GuanWords: 708Update Time: 24/01/12 19:21:44
The current initial subscription is just 16,000, which is three times better than Tai Mang and thirteen times better than Shizi. Aguan has not paid a single subscription or monthly pass. The current results are all due to everyone's strong support. Aguan is really flattered. or2!
It's only around twelve o'clock now. Although the rise is very slow, it should still be able to rush upward. When the evening is over, Aguan will report again.
I went to sleep at eight o'clock in the morning when I wrote this. Now I wake up again and feel a little confused. I will post my thanks tomorrow.
Let’s talk about yesterday’s plot here.
In the past, Aguan thought that there was no problem with the plot, but there were too many updates yesterday, and it was refined many times before it was released, resulting in the details being a bit rough.
The original plot flow of going to Zhou's house was for the protagonist to come to the house forcefully and defeat Jian Yuhua. Zhou Huaili didn't want to admit defeat, so he asked the protagonist to fight Jian Yuhua again on the pretext of leaving the ring to see if there was any miracle.
The protagonist is definitely not angry at this, and directly asks Zhou Huaili to come and fight if he wants Qingjiang Wharf. Zhou Huaili cannot save face in public, which leads to a dilemma. Luo Ning talks to smooth things over, asking the Zhou family to withdraw from the wharf, admitting defeat, and the protagonist goes in to old Mrs. Zhou. Happy birthday.
This emotional ups and downs is absolutely fine, but because the writing was rather cumbersome, Aguan made temporary changes and did not let the protagonist come in to celebrate his birthday, allowing Zhou Huaili and Xuanyuan Chao to directly use their power to suppress others, and then because of Jian Yuhua's incident, the protagonist flipped the table , Luo Ning came out to smooth things over and walked away.
This resulted in a lot of emotions in the first few pictures. In the last chapter, the villain put pressure again and stirred up hatred, and the protagonist left without doing anything.
This is a very serious mistake. Some readers thought it was wrong. When Aguan looked back, he didn't even notice that it was an anticlimax.
There were so many updates that I couldn’t notice the flaws in the details, and there was nothing I could do about it. Aguan posted four more chapters in the morning, just to vent his emotions, so that everyone wouldn’t feel aggrieved.
In the future, with normal updates, this kind of low-level hatred-pulling-too-forced behavior should no longer occur.
Also, there are too many updates. I couldn’t sleep after it was released last night. I’m a bit confused. I’m not sure whether I can write it out tonight. Aguan will try his best.
Aguan spends more time refining each chapter than it takes to code it out. He will die if he even updates fourteen chapters. I hope everyone can understand or2!