I wrote three beginnings, and for the first time in my life I had difficulty choosing.
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The evil manWords: 451Update Time: 24/01/12 18:39:26
Zhetian is a world that I like very much, so this time I want to think about the beginning carefully.
The first beginning I conceived was the earth, the earth after Ye Fan was taken away by the Kowloon Coffin. The good thing is that you can meet that mean Ryoma in advance, but the bad thing is that no one seems to like watching the Earth Chapter.
The second beginning I conceived was about gambling in the Northern Divine City. The protagonist was cut out by Ye Fan? This beginning is the one I prefer. The good thing is that at this stage, Ye Fan is about to enter the Four Pole, and the most handsome uncle, King Jiang Shen, is about to be dug out of the Purple Mountain. The downside is that there will definitely be no real fight with Ye Fan for a period of time, because Lu Bu's Demon Heart Crossing is equivalent to the stage of Xian Sanzhan Dao.
The third beginning I conceived was the Overlord Star. The advantage is that all the skills and cultivation can be achieved in one step. The disadvantage is that the Overlord Star is too far away from the Beidou. I don’t even know how to throw the protagonist from the Overlord Star to the Beidou. .
To be honest, the second opening is the most writeable and readable among the three openings, but I still want to find a better opening. Tonight, I want to hear your opinions. Can you help me?
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I want to copy a book review, because you are the real kings. The idea stage ends before 12 o'clock tomorrow morning. I will start writing in the afternoon and publish the chapter on Shading the Sky at 8 o'clock in the evening. Therefore, you'd better give me feedback before twelve o'clock tomorrow. Thank you all readers. I wish all readers good luck and good luck in the Year of the Ox.