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The first volume begins and ends at Massey Bionic Pet Hospital.
In terms of results, this book is undoubtedly a very thorough one. It failed in the first round of recommendations and may not be recommended again before it is put on the shelves.
The reason is not difficult to understand.
Normally, a story should have a clear main line at the beginning, and the plot will advance along the main line. Every time a puzzle appears, the reader's expectations will be aroused, and the puzzle must be solved in the following plot to complete the harvest.
However, due to the outline, I cannot write like this. If I write like this, I will have to wander in the cyberpunk world for a long time. The content of the spiritual world and the trait of "Sky Spirit" will appear very late, and, it will appear very late. It will be very abrupt and make readers feel like they are scratching their heads to make up for the setting.
More importantly, this will tear the story apart, and the spiritual world will be completely reduced to a new map, losing the core of the story - the spiritual world. The two main lines of the spiritual world are causally entangled and advance together.
In my earliest expectations, Li Liang accidentally and inevitably got involved in Yuan Zhen's plan. In order to save Meisai, he had to go to the gate of the deep sea. Then, due to his personality, he entered the spiritual world and experienced something that made him unable to After understanding the mystery, he returned to Earth again.
The whole process is hurried and involuntary, accompanied by one unsolvable mystery after another. The vast spiritual world is like a picture scroll, suddenly unfolding, allowing the reader to quickly close it after a glimpse.
I hope that through the first volume, I can slightly broaden the depth of the worldview, and logically and self-consistently accommodate technology, Tao, magic, and countless races of intelligent creatures into the basic setting of spirit.
In my imagination, everything is orderly and doing its own thing. In the endless years, countless major events have happened in the spiritual world, and one brilliant civilization has appeared one after another, each with its own splendor.
Every creature follows its own logical actions and together form a real world.
Li Liang is just a slightly special human being from one of the fundamental worlds.
Imagination is beautiful, but reality is embarrassing.
Limited by writing power and control of rhythm, the plot of the first volume is too compact and Li Liang lacks initiative. After reading the first ten chapters, many readers have accumulated too many confusions in their minds but cannot get answers. Seeing the protagonist get gold I didn't see any specific gains with my fingers, which puts this story in a category that can be read or not read. You may lose interest in continuing reading after eating a meal.
I discovered this problem when I failed to advance in the first round of recommendations. I felt very frustrated and was ready to give up. I even wrote a new beginning based on this framework.
However, during the few days of the break, I often thought of the scenes that would happen in the future in this story. I thought of Li Liang. He is kind but not pedantic. He muddles through but will stand up in important choices. He is the kind of protagonist I want to write about most. , at a certain moment, a group of pure friends will gather around, toasting and drinking together.
So, I started writing again.
Starting from the small island, the pace is deliberately slowed down and the puzzle hints are as obvious as possible.
Of course, it won't help your grades, after all, there's really nothing you can do to change it in the future.
But starting from the second volume, the plot will definitely be clearer and linear.
The summary is over.
I have adjusted my psychological expectations about my grades, done my duty as a writer, and continued writing.
However, due to work, it is difficult to guarantee the release of new chapters at a fixed time. Friends who have been following the updates have worked hard, and I am extremely sorry.
The next volume starts with the Zhuos Gate Valve.
"Behold, there is a sword from without."
