Several hundred words were concealed, Xiaolan was missing a paragraph, Boer was missing a large paragraph (I made up a line last night and gave it back to her)
I pulled it back to look again,
Only then did I realize that some chapters had similar problems, and one or two sentences were suddenly removed.
Basically, I will read it immediately after posting it to see if there are any errors or omissions.
Some words should have been hidden later.
And that would be disruptive to the coherence of my characters,
For example, Chapter 063
Bol was so angry that he yelled XXX at the Vikings.
Chapter 076 This chapter just mentions that plot. If I remove my foul language in the future, the dialogue here will not be coherent.
I read it again and some passages were missing.
If you see any incoherence in the future, send me a chapter and tell me if there's anything missing here?
If after checking, it is confirmed that it is, I will see if I can post it in the author's words of the chapter, or modify the wording.
I always wonder how to write about the barbarism and brutality of the Middle Ages.
I feel that dialogue between common people or nobles can better express the cultural sense of an era.
For example, students 20 years ago might talk about skipping class and playing games, but now they say that so-and-so comes out to play mobile games and play together.
From the words, we can feel the difference in people's living environment at that time. Technology has advanced (there are mobile phones) and wealth has increased (there are mobile phones).
There is no need to describe how sacred the church is, or how cruel and violent the fight is... to express contemporary times.
Therefore, my recent plots are mostly reflected in character dialogue.
Earlier I wrote a conversation between a young man and a woman. I thought it was very in line with the trend, but several hundred words were deleted.
In view of the hidden scenes, I need to temporarily modify the plot of the characters after a few chapters.
Otherwise, it will still be hidden. I am very sure that if one chapter of some plots is changed in the future, my characters will become incoherent.
Chapter 1, the part where the Vikings let Little Bad be redeemed,
The original text states that the Vikings thought the boy was so good-looking that they planned to sell him to Eastern Rome as a young eunuch. Because the nobles there liked him, he was also hidden.
He could only change it to, the Vikings laughed at him, clenched his fist angrily, and swore to wipe it off the map of Vikings.
As for the eunuch section, I originally wanted to bring in a long-planned eunuch plot from Eastern Rome...
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I prefer to use down-to-earth words more and more.
I remember watching a movie and drama last year, and someone in the group recommended it.
In one scene, after the nobleman had diarrhea and the valet helped him clean it,
On a whim, the noble lord asked the male servant to give him...
Master, valet,
This master likes men? No, he also does this kind of thing to the maid,
The master is just using his power,
These servants, whether male or female, are just his belongings. He doesn't think much about them, and the servants are used to it.
When you look at a vase, you don't think about your strength or whether the vase hurts, right?
From the screen and the short command dialogue, I immediately have a strong feeling about the status of the lord, the status of the servant, and the atmosphere of the times.
I wrote in a certain paragraph that when Ladd spoke harsh words to Dawn,
"You bastard, why don't you get out of here quickly and make amends to Lord Oran."
Originally,
"If you dare to steal something from Bai Ying's collar...I will stab you through the ****..."
Ladd's use of such extremely insulting words may even make readers wonder whether Ladd likes men?
I didn't write it in the end, but in the last chapter, I used one of these sentences,
Death is riding on you.
Well, this sentence is still hidden,
People have the power, excluding special cases,
Most of them will turn into demons, or restrain themselves from becoming demons.
These people pick up swords and kill people.
Put down your sword and go enslave the people,
As I write, according to modern values, I am a jerk;
So did the Vikings, and so did the Angru people (I read the information, they drove the Celts into the mountains, Wales and Scotland for this land), and committed a lot of killings.
They were savages too, just like the Vikings.
This is the country of barbarians,
Slave trade, after the city was broken,
The plot of these bad guys insulting the enemy's wife,
Treat the enemy with too fierce a killing method,
I've written a little bit of this...but now I need time to revise it.
My writing method is different from the writing methods of other lord novels. No one is good or bad.
Don't criticize this book because of this, it's just that everyone has different emphasis.
I can copy farming. I can read hundreds of chapters on everything from gunpowder to atomic bombs in the encyclopedia.
But what I wrote is not seductive, I know it myself,
I also particularly like to weaken technology cheats, it depends on the situation.
I will refer to the good suggestions,
In view of the repeated occurrence of this covert situation,
It took me a lot of mental examination,
It took me a lot of mental examination,
It took me a lot of mental examination,
I will use less words in the future and will update them tomorrow or the day after tomorrow.
I'm going to let one character go and let the book be filled with love.
Modifications take time.
Thank you for the max monthly pass.
