This volume is called "Pure Land".
Frankly speaking, this volume gave me a lot of confidence, not only because I completed the FLAG that lasted for ten thousand days and a month in the Nagano chapter, but also because my grades were rising.
The biggest difficulty for online article authors should be to find the right path among the "comments"...
Although I was scolded by my trainee every day.
But the rising performance proves that I don’t need to ignore these voices.
The road is still long, let’s walk slowly.
After writing the second volume and looking back, I found that I have a writing habit, which is to pay too much attention to the "inheritance, transition, and connection" between two stories.
I tend to unwisely write several transitional chapters after a climax.
For me, this is not easy to write. It takes time to ensure sufficient emotion in each chapter.
For readers, this may not be good enough, because they do not see the actual advancement of the plot, and subscriptions will also show a real-time decline.
But for the story...this is important.
The ups and downs, gatherings and separations all require comparison. What I want to write is not just a story about "the protagonist becomes stronger". At least in the Nagano in my heart, there is a group of people who are busy with their own affairs every day. Rushing.
It would look nice if it was more compact.
It's not that bad if you slow down a bit.
The last chapter of this volume is called "About Life and Death."
What Gu Shen and Chu Ling said about life and death... are actually the exploration of the meaning of the "Pure Land".
After the cemetery, the climax gradually died down.
I didn't expect the second volume to end like this.
In the original final chapter, there are actually many plots of "Going South", which I have made a lot of deletions. Maybe if my results are better, I will choose to add in these plots that I prefer.
The next volume is called "The Traveler."
This is a more interesting volume title than "Pure Land". I have made a lot of detailed outlines early on. I still need to sort it out carefully. However, there will be a big push tomorrow, so I will not ask for leave. I hope everyone can support me. Monthly ticket~
Compared with the second volume, the plot of the third volume will be more compact and intense.
Also, thank you all for your chapters. This is really my biggest motivation. I hope that the chapters in the next volume can break 100 TAT~ and go to school.
