This is probably the end of the second volume. It feels a bit strange to put the next chapter in this volume. So today I will write a little summary at the end of the chapter, and then I will revise it after reflecting on what new thoughts I have.
To be honest, this volume can really be regarded as...a fateful one. It was written from September 15, 2021 to March 19, 2022, with a total of 289,051 words, which is more than the number of words in the first volume. Some.
During this period, I actually encountered stalls several times, the kind where you sit in front of the computer, open the coding software, and even though you know exactly what you want to write in your mind, you just can't write it down at all, and then you just sit there and think about life.
To be honest, I feel that this volume is slightly better written than the previous volume, probably because this volume is mainly at sea, and Agnes is not as restricted as she was in Feneport City.
However, there are still many problems, such as the Bodivia incident. I didn't feel it when I was writing it, but when I re-read it later, I found that the pace seemed a bit draggy, and the whole incident was not fully explained.
In addition, there is also the problem that many people react too slowly to the upgrade... In fact, from the full text to now, Agnes became an Extraordinary at the beginning of the year, and it is only now in late December. Just because I wrote too much, it seemed a little slow. Maybe some branches should be cut?
To be honest, if you really want to level up quickly, it is perfectly fine for Agnes to use raw traits directly (φ(>ω<*)).
In fact, according to the original outline, Agnes was not in such a good state at this point, and she should even be in a semi-crazy state, and Mr. Chester was originally supposed to die. but......
I really can’t do it! (Well, the mother didn’t want to stab her own daughter, and the original book was already enough)
But in this way, Agnes accepts her abnormality a little too calmly? , it looks like it is being replaced by pollution subtly.
Based on the previous theories of "Tao Heart" and "Human Heart", Agnes cannot actually be regarded as "Huizhen", or in other words, only a part of her is "Huizhen" for the time being.
The memories she has are those of "Huizhen" (the situation of "Huizhen" will be mentioned in the next volume), and her desires are also different from those of "Huizhen".
In fact, Agnes only has the same desire to "remember" as "Huizhen" for the time being, so guess whether this is "Huizhen's" "human heart" or "Tao heart"? (^_−)☆
Okay, that’s all for now.
