Questions about frequent revisions of articles

Style: Science Author: Mega CatWords: 780Update Time: 24/01/12 13:09:33
Because it is my first time to write, and my writing style is not good enough, it is impossible to be so thoughtful when writing. Sometimes there will be some logical errors, or the editing is not good enough, and the foreshadowing is not good enough, which may be misunderstood by everyone as poisonous points.

When I receive feedback from book friends, I will make corrections as soon as possible.

You will often see my articles being modified, showing that the previous chapters are not subscribed, so you don't need to look back. If there are any special changes, I will let you know.

Most of the modifications are to correct typos, small logical loopholes, or wrong numbers, which will not affect the overall plot.

If there are changes to the overall plot, I will provide this kind of single chapter explanation.

Thanks for everyone's corrections.

If you see what I wrote and find a logical loophole, you can explain the sentence where the problem occurs, and I will reply to you in time, or explain my thoughts, or modify it immediately.

When people scold me, they must be more specific. Thank you all.

Thanks again.

PS: Some people say that the protagonist I wrote is not worthy of the character of an elderly scientist.

In fact, everyone's position is too rational and they don't put themselves in others' shoes. Shifen's character is awesome, but he has been acting like an old goblin since he was a child. Is this normal? How do family members, relatives and friends still get along with each other?

Be an orphan in this life?

Therefore, the characters I wrote in the early stages were fully integrated into this age group, so that the protagonist could have a normal family and a relatively normal environment of relatives and friends.

In real life, the more sophisticated a person is, the more likely they are to talk nonsense and lie to others. These people are extremely smooth in dealing with things and do not have to put on a superior air in every situation. Anyone who puts on high airs is either a liar or a XXX.

Some people say that I lick women, pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger, and pretend to be a slap in the face.

I'm so honest, I've almost never written about women, so where's the licking coming from? Or, given the incredible opportunity, when you don’t have the strength, you don’t do your best to keep a low profile, and choose to expose yourself and just wait to die? Furthermore, no matter how awesome people are, they will still show off. The nature of human nature will not change, but the way everyone behaves is different. (For example: I have been playing elite games all my life...I am not interested in money...)

If there is an error in my logic in this regard, please name the person in the specific location.

If what I wrote is not appropriate enough, I will immediately apologize and correct it immediately.

Again, your advice is welcome.

Every detailed pointer you give is the best support for this work to mature.