After writing more than 300,000 words, my writing finally became much more harmonious.
I finally discovered that there was something wrong with the second and third chapters.
The character cards were not edited well at that time, so Duan Zhen's character didn't look particularly mature in the first three chapters.
At least the performance is not as calm as a time traveler should be.
So I added a few sentences, deleted a few sentences, and changed the writing style and tone.
It won't affect the subsequent plot at all, it just looks more reasonable.
It should also avoid the poisonous points raised by some book friends.
It's a very subtle change, so book lovers who think it's fine at the beginning don't need to worry about it.
Duan Zhen is training his heart, and the author is also training his heart!
We are about to return to the main world, and there should be five or six chapters left in Fengyun World.
Dragon and Snake are in Chapter 45, and Storm and Cloud is around Chapter 50.
Duan Zhen should also stay in the main world for a while, including how to solve the subsequent disaster in Longchuan City and the unfolding of the Qingyuan realm.
The next volume should be regarded as a traditional fantasy main city style, describing the various experiences of the protagonist in Novice Village, but it will definitely not be cliché.
You have also seen that I rarely write about pretending to be a pig to eat a tiger, or pretending to be slapped in the face.
I sacrificed some of the fun points, but I also hope to add another kind of fun point!
First, I would like to ask for your thoughts and ideas. Where do you want to go in the next volume of the world of heavens~
Now that a single chapter has been opened, let’s chat together~
By the way, a writer friend of mine is about to open a new book. The background setting is the same as mine, but I am a Morotian-ryu and he is a swordsman.
I read the first five chapters three times and they were very fascinating! Now I’m giving him a warm-up. When the new book is uploaded, I hope everyone can appreciate it and review it~
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