Before I knew it, it was already a million words long. When I saw someone else’s speech, it was thousands of words long. When it was my turn, I really didn’t know what to say.
What to say about this book? Just because Si Guan has been relatively free recently, and there is a shortage of books, I decided to write a book for fun.
I won’t go into detail about the two heroines, Thirteenth Sister and Fan Ning. They each have their own preferences. Anyway, there are some posts that should be deleted and posts that should be deleted should be criticized. As long as what everyone says makes sense, that’s fine. No matter how unpleasant it sounds, Si Guan will accept it humbly.
Of course, if you only read a chapter or two, or if you read the comments without reading at all, you will be banned forever.
Anyway, Si Guan doesn’t rely on writing books to earn a living.
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Regarding the messy plot, Si Guan really wants to apologize to everyone.
1. When I first started the book, Si Guan really wrote whatever came to mind╮(‵▽′)╭.
2. The fourth officer did not think from the reader's perspective. There were some plots that the fourth officer knew well, but the readers were confused.
Third and Fourth Guan mistakenly believed that everyone knew the plot of the movie, so they did not introduce the characters and plot in detail.
Later, I didn’t introduce it in detail because Si Guan thought it was very superficial. After all, if you want to introduce a character’s movie plot experience, it can range from more than 300 words to as many as a thousand words. Si Guan felt that there was really no need to do this. Bad money.
In addition, I didn’t introduce much about the real people and events, just to avoid getting too excited without realizing it. If anyone is confused, you can just leave a comment in this chapter, and I will add comments.
4. Regarding the business development part, the fourth manager only briefly mentioned it, also because the fourth manager felt that this was very superficial, and besides, this book is a Hong Kong comprehensive theme after all. . . Bar?
If you write about business development in detail, Si Guan thinks, wouldn’t this become a rebirth article?
There is also the fact that the villain boss collects the lunch very quickly. Some people may find it childish. This is also the mistake of Si Guan.
In fact, before many villainous bosses receive lunch, there should be a plot of various preparations and the like.
Just as I wrote in detail about the preparations before and after Jinsha's attack on the street, it seems that it is just a simple matter of more than a hundred frogs riding on the face.
But this was all due to cowardice. He first instigated Kun Qing's rebellion, got the news about Jin Sha's recent dishonesty, and then asked for various information from the captives of the Holy Crown Alliance. Then he planned to board the ship with the Xie family and the Zheng family, and finally After finishing the situation, Long and his group completely cut off all external contact with Jinsha, forcing Jinsha to take the waterway to fight to the death, and planned step by step to achieve the situation.
So starting from the current eighth volume, Si Guan will try to be more specific in writing, so as not to make many readers confused like before.
Well. . . .
Unconsciously, I have said a bit too much, and it seems that all I have mentioned are the shortcomings of this book. As for the advantages, does it count that it is a soft-hearted person and is not very cruel?
All right.
In fact, Si Guan is a very thin-skinned person. If he wants to boast, he really doesn’t know what to say. The most Si Guan can do is ask for monthly tickets and not expect rewards or anything else.
Having said so much, I still want to thank everyone who supports me. Although everyone who silently subscribed and voted did not say much, I still hope that everyone can point out some shortcomings of this book.
Si Guan really wants to work hard to write this book. Whether you read the original version or the pirated version, as long as you like this book, it is your recognition and support for Si Guan. Of course, if you read the pirated version, you will It would be better if you subscribe. You should know that there is no explanation of the origin of the characters in pirated posts (﹡??o??﹡).
The last four people shamelessly said it once, asking for rewards, asking for monthly votes, asking for recommendation votes, and all kinds of requests~
