Chapter 323: "Dragon Knight" plot, think about how to change it

Style: Romance Author: View the sea of ​​cloudsWords: 2517Update Time: 24/01/12 08:34:51
"The Legend of the Condor Heroes"... "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", just by looking at the title, you know that what Mr. Jin wants to write is a pure love story, mainly about the love story between Yang Guo and Xiao Longnu.

However, a love story can be sweet and smooth sailing, or it can be full of hardships, ups and downs and be unforgettable. In "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", Mr. Jin obviously wanted to write the latter.

To this end, he set up many obstacles for Yang Guo and Xiao Longnu.

Worldly etiquette and worldly prejudice are the first obstacles that Mr. Jin sets up for Yang Guo and Xiao Longnu. This was decided when Mr. Jin set up the identity relationship between Yang Guo and Xiao Longnu.

Teacher-student love was not accepted in the society at that time and was considered immoral. In order for Yang Guo and Xiao Longnu to overcome this obstacle, they not only have to face the gossip about them from the world, but also overcome their own inner obstacles.

Rather, it was to overcome Yang Guo's inner obstacles. Because Xiao Longnu is not familiar with worldly affairs and is outside the secular world. Sophisticated people, etiquette and rules are all nonsense to her. But Yang Guo was different. Although Yang Guo had a miserable childhood, he was educated by Guo Jing and Huang Rong, and the worldly etiquette had been engraved in his bones.

So Yang Guo always regarded Xiao Longnu as his master. Even though Xiao Longnu was as beautiful as a fairy, even though he and Xiao Longnu had a close relationship in the ancient tomb, Yang Guo still didn't dare to have any inappropriate thoughts about Xiao Longnu.

In fact, Xiao Longnu also has an obstacle, that is, she has a pure heart and few desires.

The plot of the dragon knight appeared, firstly, to free the little dragon girl from a state of pure heart and few desires, and to transform from a fairy back to a mortal, possessing the seven emotions and six desires of a mortal.

The second is to overcome Yang Guo's mental obstacles.

Yang Guo and Xiao Longnv had lived in seclusion in the ancient tomb for many years. In fact, he had already fallen in love with Xiao Longnv in his heart, to the point of being unforgettable and committed to life and death. I just started to be bound by worldly etiquette. The emergence of the plot of the Dragon Knight, when the little dragon girl expressed her true feelings and asked Yang Guo if he wanted to be his wife, was an impact on the worldly obstacles in Yang Guo's heart.

And Yang Guo is a man who dares to love, hate, and is bohemian. When he knows Xiao Longnu’s feelings for him and his own feelings for Xiao Longnu, then what does he care about your teacher-student relationship?

Just like what he said to Xiao Longnu when they reunited: "What's the master-disciple status, what's a clean reputation, we're all just talking nonsense! Get the hell out of here!"

Probably the entire "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" is actually an interpretation of what Yang Guo said.

If the teacher-student love and worldly etiquette are the first obstacles that Mr. Jin sets for Yang Guo and Xiao Longnv, and the worldly test for Yang Guo and Xiao Longnv, then the broken arm and loss of integrity are the second obstacles between Yang Guo and Xiao Longnv. obstacles, this is a test for themselves.

Yang Guotian's proud son ended up in despair and a cripple.

The dragon girl emerged from the world as a fairy, and finally became a miserable woman who lost her virginity.

Put yourself in another person’s shoes, if you were a woman and the man you loved suddenly lost a right arm and became disabled, would you still stay true to him and stick to him? If you are a man and the woman you love is defiled by a thief and is no longer innocent, will you still love her for the rest of your life?

I believe few people can give a positive answer right away, right?

Let’s not talk about the first one. The second one is that even in modern society, there are still countless people with virginity complex in their hearts, not to mention the era when Yang Guo and Xiao Longnu valued chastity.

Look at Yang Guo and Xiao Longnu again, see their persistence for love, see their determination and courage, will you be more deeply moved in your heart?

To be honest, when Wang Xuan decided to write "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", his first thought was that the plot of the Dragon Knight must be modified, because when he was following this movie, he was disgusted by the plot. .

However, when he calmed down to think quietly and read the entire "Dragon Movie" over and over again, he suddenly felt uncertain in his heart.

Of course he could change this plot, and it wouldn't be too difficult. He could change the identity relationship between Yang Guo and Xiao Longnu at the beginning, for example, change the relationship between master and apprentice to brother and sister, and Xiao Longnu only teaches apprentices on behalf of his master, so he can discard it. The plot of Dragon Knight.

Because the romance between senior sister and junior brother was acceptable in ancient times and did not have to bear secular prejudice, naturally there was no need for the plot of the Dragon Knight to break the barrier in Yang Guo's heart.

But after the revision, without secular prejudices, would the love affair between Yang Guo and Xiao Longnu still be so ups and downs, shocking, touching, unforgettable, and soul-stirring that it would be difficult to let go?

"The Legend of the Condor Heroes" or "The Legend of the Condor Heroes"? Will it still be a classic in the hearts of countless people?

the answer is negative!

The plot of the Dragon Knight is a very important turning point in "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", which greatly promotes the plot. Since then, Xiao Longnu and Yang Guo have experienced four separations, spanning sixteen years.

"Yes!" Wang Xuan had an idea and thought of how to change it.

In the original work, Yin Zhiping seemed to be possessed by ghosts and defiled Xiao Longnu in the middle of the night. But why did Zhao Zhijing know so much about this matter? This is a very scary question to think about.

Wang Xuan could have completely changed this plot to show that Zhao Zhijing first discovered the whereabouts of the two Yang Longs. Out of covetousness for the first disciple, Zhao Zhijing deliberately revealed the news to Yin Zhiping, thus inducing him to commit crimes and benefit from them.

The method of inducement was also simple. Zhao Zhijing attacked Yin Zhiping from behind and made Yin Zhiping intoxicated by Meng Xiaoyaosan, an aphrodisiac that can make people fascinated.

Of course, we can't really let Yin Zhiping become a dragon knight. Just when Yin Zhiping was about to succeed, Ouyang Feng appeared with Yang Guo and destroyed it.

Yang Guo was also given an aphrodisiac. In order to have his grandson, Ouyang Feng specially gave Yang Guo an aphrodisiac, an aphrodisiac that makes him wake up unaware of the world. So it was Yang Guo who really merged with Xiao Longnu.

But Yang Guo didn't know.

Yin Zhiping didn't know that he was in the dream of Xiaoyao Powder. Although it was destroyed by Ouyang Feng, all kinds of hallucinations would appear in his dreams, all kinds of hallucinations of having sex with the person he likes, and he thought that he had defiled Xiao Longnu.

Only Ouyang Feng and Zhao Zhijing knew the truth about the whole matter. Ouyang Feng was crazy and got his lunch box later. Zhao Zhijing was very aware of the characteristics of Meng Xiaoyao Powder and did not tell the truth about the matter, so he kept using this matter to blackmail Yin Zhiping.

The subsequent plot can completely follow the original work. Yang Guo and Xiao Longnu still had to endure the prejudice of the world, still had to endure the test of broken arms and joints, and experienced four separations of life and death, spanning sixteen years.

The truth about Xiao Longnu's chastity will be buried forever as Ouyang Feng receives his lunch box and Zhao Zhijing is stung to death by a bee.

The difference is that readers will feel much better.

Just change it.

Ouyang Feng is crazy and is completely capable of doing such a thing. Zhao Zhijing also had such intentions in order to compete for the position of chief disciple. This change is absolutely feasible.

"Perfect!" Wang Xuan mentally praised his clear thinking.

This was just a small change, and it only took Wang Xuan two hours to complete it. Then Wang Xuan checked the following chapters and adjusted all the unadjusted plots involving the Dragon Knight plot.

It took another two hours.

Done, call it a day.

Wang Xuan felt a sense of accomplishment as he finally solved a problem that had been bothering him for many days.

Wang Xuan is a mortal, not a saint. Even if he figured out the mystery of the Dragon Knight plot, deep down he still finds it difficult to accept that he cannot be that great. When he thought that the pure, elegant and beautiful little dragon girl had been defiled, Wang Xuan felt as sick as if he had eaten a fly.

Now that the change is like this, although the meaning is gone, the overall framework has not changed, and the original flavor has not changed. While retaining the integrity of the original work, Wang Xuan can accept it in his heart.

This is the limit of what he can do.

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If you think the plot of the Dragon Knight can be modified, you can talk about it and discuss it.

Anyway, after thinking about it for two days, I only thought of changing it like this. It can be said that the plot has been slightly adjusted to retain the original flavor of the original work.