The reflections on problems in writing have been described in the previous essay and will not be repeated.
It should be obvious that after the operation to rescue Aaliyah began, the pace of the Ocean City chapter accelerated - I did not describe any details or feelings, I just pushed forward the plot as quickly as possible and finally ended the incident.
There are very practical reasons for writing this way. One is, as mentioned above, I have found that the complex story of Ocean City is not pleasing to the eye, so I want to return to the previous "small" writing method of "focusing on the protagonist team", and It's not a "big stage", "group drama" or "excessive force" type arrangement.
Now that we have such an awareness, it is naturally impossible to linger in such a plot.
Another reason is that it is really difficult to write details in this kind of "group portrait play" because the pen and ink and energy are limited, and it will take a lot of energy to choose "which character" and "what kind of dialogue" to describe, and it is so pointless. To please... (Refer to the later version of the Ice and Fire TV series - there are too many characters. When all the characters meet, they just say a few puns and ironic lines, without any detailed characterization or interactive arrangements. From this, I think, "Big scenes, many characters" "It's really a stupid story strategy. It's a strategy that exploits the shortcomings and avoids the strong points of the story. It's a strategy that I will definitely avoid in the future...even the inevitable big scenes in the later period. Can only focus on the protagonist team.)
Therefore, I directly followed the previously determined outline and pushed the story forward with great vigor.
However, this may cause some confusion in perception - it is obviously a brother and sister reunion that is going to be written about in a big way, but why does it feel like it is not fully understood?
It was clear that the old enemy Kennedy had been eliminated, but why was there not much emphasis on it? …
I actually tried to add more pen and ink to the key points as much as possible, but I may have speeded up the pace unconsciously, so I guess it may have created such a look and feel.
If I really feel like this when I read it, it’s just because I want to end this noisy dragon and phoenix as soon as possible...
Then, you can start writing, for example, on a stormy cruise ship, under the quiet room light, writing letters to your old friends, slowly unfolding the shadow of the next story...
It's not tiring to write, it's also fun.
In the end, I found that no matter what my grades were, I still had to write.
Only by writing can we truly understand and make real progress.
In addition, due to more practical reasons (in short, income...), I need to arrange time to do some other work, so there is no way to achieve the previous update rhythm. Now I can only update once a day, and then every Monday is off.
That’s it, it’s Friday, I wish you a happy weekend!
