Let me first talk about my own evaluation of this volume.
I have to admit that the writing of this volume is a bit unsatisfactory. The whole volume is too loose and too bland... What's more serious is that the updates are seriously stretched.
These are the reasons why the book's performance has become increasingly dismal.
However, what makes me particularly touched is that there are still more than a hundred book friends who are silently supporting me, and there are still book friends who still insist on voting.
grateful!
I believe that the best reward for this support is to finish writing this story.
Back to the topic.
Why is this volume written like this?
I think the main reason lies in the initial plot design——
In the outline text, there are more than 1,300 words of relevant text in this volume... However, its main content is almost an analysis of the original work, and there are very few that actually involve the development of the protagonist's story.
But to be honest, I actually designed it this way intentionally.
What I think is that after the protagonist has the foundation of the first volume, he really joins the mysterious story in the second volume... This is a process of integration, and the main purpose is to maintain the original "plot" under the influence of the butterfly effect. .
Then, the problem arises.
This is equivalent to carefully borrowing the main line of the second volume of the original work, and my protagonist has become a supporting role in the actual sense...
There are many questions and it is very difficult to write.
In addition, I originally wanted to suppress the promotion of the protagonist in this volume to reflect the difficulty of the "pleasure" stage, and there were even more problems to be solved.
There is also the coercion of the river crab mythical beast, and my lack of writing ability——
In this volume, I was "floating" most of the time, and I didn't feel down to earth.
So, I lost control of the content.
My initial word count plan before starting the book was like this -
Roughly divided according to the protagonist sequence, from ordinary people to the old days, each stage is about 10 words, and the total number of words is about 120... Of course, the sequence 6 stages are more.
But it shouldn’t be as much as it is now!
I roughly estimated that I actually wrote about 40 words in the sequence 6 stage, and 12 words in the sequence 5 stage.
It was clearly out of control.
In this process, inspiration is drained, enthusiasm is consumed, and laziness grows... Therefore, I will write more and more difficult and slower in the future.
Well now, all the difficulties and problems have been enclosed in the end of this volume.
I believe that entering the third volume, everything will slowly get better!
Let’s talk about the content.
This volume is still a story of growth and escape.
The dilemma of the protagonist in the first volume is mainly reflected in the real environment, while in this volume it is transferred to the spiritual level... simply put, it is "unreachable thoughts".
Witches are already tangled in their hearts. The protagonist is considered a "good" witch, so of course she will be even more tangled.
I don’t know how well I’ve written it, and whether it’s good enough to be read... I can only say that I’ve finished writing it, so I’ll force myself to make a little statement here.
This volume has a (I think) very good interaction with the first volume, and that is the original fate of the protagonist——
What kind of future would he have had without the time-travel at the beginning of the story?
The first volume is about his leader York, and the second volume is about his colleague John...these two people are the portrayal of the protagonist's fate.
What a pity! What a pity!
Because of my poor writing state at the end of the volume, I wrote poorly and awkwardly on this point.
but--
Yesterday is over, let’s start again and welcome tomorrow!
The next thing I should do is to clean up my mood and start again. Bamboo sticks and mango shoes are better than horses. Who is afraid? A coop of mist and rain will last a lifetime.
In the third volume, "Unruly Sea King", the protagonist who has escaped physical and mental difficulties will usher in a new story on the vast sea, grow his own capacity, and lay his own path to leadership...
Please look forward to it!
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Attachment: I mentioned the guest role in the group a long time ago... I originally wanted to post it officially in the book club, but now that I am so exhausted, I might as well just mention it here in a low voice——
The main character and crew members are now available. If you join the group, just send me the characters.
(There is no guarantee that the show will appear, and the original taste is not guaranteed.)
