Because my writing skills are indeed very poor, and I am obviously a newbie, but I ended up making a very outrageous setting.
So the current situation is that I feel that it is not broken, because I seem to be the only one who can understand it, but it is completely different in the eyes of readers.
According to my idea, the front is foreshadowing and foreshadowing, while the back is gradual revelation, seeing certain truths, and through the development of the plot, it is finally merged into a plot and a story that I find interesting.
But I didn't expect that my rubbish writing skills would lead to my foreshadowing and hints... becoming completely self-explanatory.
But now I am about to reveal the first part of the truth, but I find that... the development of things is completely different from what I imagined.
[For example, my description is——]
[(Chapter 50) Mr. A's house, where he lives alone, has a messy kitchen with garbage everywhere, and the detergent foam is soaked in dried tomato paste. 】
[(Chapter 132) The waiter asked Mr. A, do you want ketchup? Mr. A said, don’t put it away, I don’t like to eat it. 】
Since Mr. A doesn’t like ketchup, where does the ketchup at home come from?
Of course, I made a lot of buffers for this kind of plot, which can be explained as coming from takeaways, making ketchup both awkward and reasonable. There are many similar hints. When these are concentrated at a certain point, it is the truth.
As a result, the writing was not strong enough and buried too far.
When I revealed that the ketchup in Mr. A’s house was actually tomato ketchup, I was afraid that you would not be able to accept it at all.
Therefore, I am really sorry if the subsequent plot development has caused a bad experience for readers.
