Tomorrow I will finally write the main plot of this book... it is half a million words, and I did not expect that the pace would be so awkward.
Regarding the character of the protagonist...it's my fault.
Before Yin Hang rescued An Tong, he didn't even dare to admit that he liked An Tong. When he was about to lose An Tong, he realized how much he cared about her, even the girl he had been waiting for before time travel.
After rescuing An Tong, he saw that An Tong almost left him. Even though he felt that he was not worthy and felt that he was terrible, he still had the courage to stay with An Tong because Yin Hang really liked An Tong. I even feel a little selfish for having this idea.
But even so, he still didn't dare to take the final step.
The same goes for the descriptions in these chapters...the protagonist is still the ordinary person he was before time travel.
In my imagination, when the protagonist who lives in China suddenly travels to the United States, he will subconsciously feel that the military will protect him and the police will protect him... But in the eyes of readers, why are Mao and the American police so discriminatory? And exploiting the protagonist, the protagonist is so obedient to the police?
I feel extremely aggrieved and uncomfortable.
This is indeed a problem with my writing, many of which are not clearly stated... and in a normal-paced story, the protagonist has grown up long ago, but I didn't expect that my writing would be so procrastinating.
So tomorrow is sugar + main plot, trying to put the whole book on the right track. If I can’t write the main plot, I will add updates to the main plot!
I think my main story is much more exciting than the previous mini-climax, and it will be even more exciting after the border plot comes out!
