As usual, okay first.
The seventh copy is also over.
I'll write it later as the final settlement is missing.
I still have to say what I must say, friends who keep books, please don’t pity me and kill me to your heart’s content! Subscribe fiercely! Let me have a good time!
Next, as usual, it’s time for antenna chat.
[The following gossip still contains spoilers. Friends who have not read this copy should stop reading. 】
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The original intention of this copy was to appreciate the imperfections of the Zodiac series. Remember the time when you have some regrets.
As usual, reflect on the shortcomings I have realized.
I can feel that the most criticized aspect of this copy is its arrogance in the early stage.
It’s a bit embarrassing to say, because I set up this part deliberately. Of course, it’s not about foreshadowing, but about writing a relatively stable and pure “Childhood Memories” before the abnormality sweeps across the Qingqing Prairie.
Because from the perspective of arrangement, from the moment the tiger becomes powerful, the copy will enter the collapse stage.
But everyone criticized this section for being low-impact and boring. To be honest, they are right.
After summarizing, I think the readers are right, and my original intention is also good. The problem lies in my poor control over the length of the plot. Stable childhood memories are okay, but they cannot be too long and cannot be used too much. If the chapters are "low-risk" and "stable", it would be boring.
I will definitely pay attention to this in the future.
Secondly, it is combat power.
Lin Li's combat power is neither above nor below. Compared with the daily scenes where he can get injured, which is a relatively childish world, the male protagonist's combat power is too high, such as Pleasant Goat in daily status and ordinary Doraemon. resident.
I found that low combat power is not a problem at all. Lin Li can use various props to bully his opponents. Like the complete Holy Lord, of course Lin Li can't beat him, but it doesn't matter, he can beat people.
But compared to the "high combat power" with low combat power, it is a bit of a headache and seems a bit out of place.
This will confuse me in my future dungeon choices.
The third question is about the details of this copy.
The abilities of the twelve zodiac signs have been modified according to my needs in this copy.
There is one setting that I forgot to mention through the mouth of the stand-in. It is that the use of abilities of these zodiac signs is not in place yet. It is probably just a patch.
Otherwise, according to my imagination, the ability of the twelve talismans will definitely be more useful.
As for why the Holy Lord himself didn't seem too awesome after possessing the talisman, I combined it with the original animation. Sometimes I am so stupid that I wrote it this way. After all, the original work had to consider Jackie Chan's mortal body.
The fourth question.
Sometimes I don’t know how to change things. I always want to write new things, but new but inferior can only be regarded as a very inferior option in the end. There is no shortcut to solve this problem, which is my own lack of imagination. This is the most It makes me emo, and sometimes I think, if I finish writing this copy, I should finish the book as soon as possible.
But just thinking about it, if this book is to be completed, at least a few copies will be needed.
The idea at the beginning of this book is that when the "growth mission" is completed, only the final story will be left - this story has been outlined very early, and one thing that is very certain is that all the copies before that time will have memory points. Characters will appear.
In short, the idea of this book is to finish writing the growth tasks at least, and at the longest, there is no limit.
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There should still be problems. If you want to criticize, you can do so in this section.
Regarding the next copy, I have no idea at the moment (it probably won’t be The Adventures of Jackie Chan).
There is basically no plot in the main world this time, so we will enter the dungeon soon.
So I must take some time off to think about it, maybe two days or three days this time, please forgive me, I want to think of something more interesting.
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Fighting antenna.
