Another dungeon story has ended, and Pujie Antenna is very pleased.
Every time I finish writing a copy, I always have the illusion of finishing it.
Again, friends who keep books can start killing it!
Kill him hard! Subscribe fiercely! Don't pity me!
As usual, let’s talk to everyone about our thoughts.
[If you have not read this copy and still plan to read it, please do not continue reading, as it is suspected of being a spoiler. 】
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The most important thing this time should be the summary and reflection on writing issues.
Why did I think of writing a fantasy story like this? To be honest, it can hardly be regarded as a fan. Apart from reprinting the Three-Year Covenant in the early stage, I didn’t even bother to borrow the name from the original work.
Xiao Yan: It’s my role.
Chun Chun is a magic reformer.
I first came up with this idea in May of last year. At that time, the Douyin meme happened to be quite popular. I thought it was very interesting, so I went to chat with the editor about whether I could use this as a selling point and directly open a complete book.
Then it happened that the third dungeon ended, and everyone said they wanted to change the taste, and the idea came back to life.
Back in May last year, the editor quickly rejected the idea.
Because the workload of replacement is large, it is difficult to be logical and self-consistent, and it is difficult to maintain interest after the gimmick is over.
How insightful.
Fortunately, I did not open such a book.
A few days after starting the copy, I clearly felt these shortcomings, but I had already written it, so I couldn’t stop halfway.
The logic is self-consistent, and I worked hard.
In terms of setting, the basic elements of the world are different, the environment is different, the customs are different, and the languages are different. These knowledge belonging to the earth are difficult to understand, because after you know it, there is no reality to compare it with.
A world where the conservation of energy is not observed is considered hard learning.
Furthermore, knowledge must come from academic ability, and the speed of acquisition is not fast. Coupled with cognitive barriers, their "mentally retarded" behavior is very normal (loud).
It's a lot of work to replace, which is actually okay. After all, what I have to write is just a copy, hundreds of thousands of words, and I don't need to prepare a fairly three-dimensional and complete world that can support an entire book.
However, the interesting ideas are consumed too quickly. With teaching aids, it is difficult to come up with interesting things all the time.
The common drawback of gimmick writing is that it is ineffective.
The graphics are fresh, and it’s interesting to watch at the beginning, but it gets a little weak in the middle, which is normal. This can only be remedied by incorporating more interesting settings.
All I can say is that I tried my best.
But the biggest problem with this copy is actually not here.
——With the whole book, it feels a bit fragmented.
Suddenly, none of the outrageous partners were gone (the last one, Li Jing, didn't count), and only Lin Li was left.
At that time, I considered not using mechanical magic, but now that I think about it, I feel that it was a bit of a waste of time, and there was something wrong with the handling.
Because there are no such outrageous companions, the writing style feels completely different from the previous one, and I can feel it myself.
If I had known, I would have brought this stinky cat Tom here, damn it!
[In addition, it can be seen from this copy that I will never write a copy of a collection of bad memes like this in (Post Bar), and I will definitely focus on childhood memories in the future.
Too many bad jokes have been played in this copy, come on. 】
——The details are not in place and the degree of completeness is not high.
Because everyone said they wanted to change their taste, I changed a bit suddenly. To be honest, the time was too short and the outline preparation was a mess.
I originally wanted to write a scholarly villain, but at the end it would be sublimated, and Lin Li would make a shining appearance, making all the poor people in the world happy.
What I wrote later was a little off.
The foreshadowing and details in the front are very lacking.
For example, there should be more foreshadowings that Tiandao is not dead, and the appearance of the decision-making meeting should not be so sudden. Lin Li was supposed to go to Zhongzhou, take a look at the customs and customs of Zhongzhou, and discover the existence of Tiandao tokens and the existence of the meeting...
Make a few like-minded friends by the way.
Then bring your friends to have some fun at the end (for example, they were brainwashed and agreed with Hun Shi Emperor's statement, but were 'awakened' by Lin Li's words, and would rather self-destruct GG than open the way for Lin Li to kill Hun, etc.) Tiandao sighs for it, etc.), at least it will be a little more exciting than Boruto.
However, the number of gimmick articles was weak, and I felt a little uncomfortable looking at the data, so I deleted and adjusted this part.
This makes a lot of the original foreshadowing I wrote earlier useless.
Let me say something weakly: "My Wife is the Way of Heaven" and "Resurrection, My Way of Heaven" are actually the original foreshadowings. Zhongzhou will also have these two books, corresponding to the original story of One Divided into Eight and the Xiao Family. ending……
But I can only be thankful that the integrity of this copy is still there.
And compared with the previous one, the ending should no longer count as deus ex machina.
The strength of the soul is something that Lin Li cannot touch. I set it up that Tiandao will deal with him. This has never changed. The awakening of Tiandao is the result of Lin Li's efforts. It does not mean that this problem will be solved as soon as the partner appears.
In this dungeon, Li Jing's role is to control them so that they cannot vote.
In the river! Quite a river!
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It's almost midnight and it's about to be released, so I won't say much more.
In short, I deeply feel the existence of the problem, and I am also summing up my experience.
No one wants this book done more than me.
Fortunately, this book is a copy flow. It is easy to cause problems when changing copies, but if problems occur, it is easy to adjust without collapse.
I would like to ask you all to subscribe.
Please, please, please.
The average subscription has been dropping recently (which is also the main reason why I accelerated this copy). Now it is only more than 8,400. I see that the ten thousand subscriptions are getting further and further away from me! ! Hey, I really want a green logo.
Let me tell you a few more things that you may be concerned about.
Q: How to write the main world?
A: The problem of the overworld has always existed in this book. Even as soon as I wrote about the overworld, I started to support the book, hahaha.
I haven't come up with a particularly good solution yet, but if I still haven't figured it out in the past few days, then after this dungeon, there may be only a few chapters of the main world, and then I will directly 'skip' it, and wait until I come up with a solution. .
The plot of the main world will be delayed for a while.
Q:The next copy?
A: It must be a childhood memory, but I won’t reveal too much yet (TNND, I haven’t thought about it yet, and I can’t reveal it even if I want to).
Q: Do you want to take a day off to complete the outline of the main world of the dungeon?
A: This book friend named Pujie Antenna, your question really touches my heart! please! Must please!
(No kidding, I have to carefully conceive a complete outline of the main world or the next dungeon. It is indeed necessary...I'm sorry. I really don't take leave often, so I hope everyone can understand me.)
Take a day or two off, okay?
Finally please subscribe! Please order in full!
By the way, begging for a monthly pass!
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