Unknowingly, another dungeon story has ended, and I am very happy.
Friends who keep books, it’s time to get started!
Share your thoughts with everyone and ask and answer some questions for yourself.
Why I thought of writing "Fruit Treasure" like this has been explained before in the writer's words, so I won't go into details. Writing it here is considered a spoiler.
Regarding the third copy, my personal evaluation is not bad, not satisfactory (Lu Xiaoguo reminds you: this idiom means barely satisfactory, not unsatisfactory).
However, controversy also exists, which will be answered slowly below.
It was also an eventful year, during which we encountered COVID-19 and then the New Year.
You may not feel it, after all, I didn’t take time off due to COVID-19, but the feeling of forcing myself to write in those days was actually very strange. What I wrote was still somewhat different from what I expected to express. The words didn’t make sense, and my head was throbbing. What a pain.
This also caused some chain reactions, otherwise I think this copy could be written better.
Let’s go directly to the Q&A. If you haven’t read the third copy and still plan to read it, don’t read any further.
Q: Does the copy have to be this long?
A: Many people ask this question, and my answer is of course no.
Indeed, a total of three copies of a book with more than 500,000 words have been written so far.
However, in my opinion, the length is probably considered a mid-level copy.
The really long ones, such as "First Player", which may be well known by many people, his latest dungeon world has almost 600,000-700,000 words written.
I can never write this kind of length, and I am not good at writing. The subsequent copies will also be limited to short or medium copies.
Question: Regarding the length of copy, do you prefer short copy or medium copy?
Q: Will all subsequent copies be dark and incomplete?
A: If there is the word "都", I can definitely answer no.
Aesthetic fatigue is indeed a problem that I need to be concerned about. With the end of the third copy, some readers have such a problem.
Magical modification is one of the selling points of this book, and rash changes can easily lose many readers.
There are readers who like to speak up and give suggestions to the author in the hope that the book will get better and better. There are also readers who read the book silently. If they don’t like it, they just delete it and hang out together.
I can guarantee that there are still readers who like and look forward to the next one still having this dark, dark and residual style, but I don’t know their proportion.
As I said before, for example, "Ten Cold", it is difficult to be dark. For example, "Baidu Tieba", which I am considering, if I want to write it, it will be a "smelly" abstract collection of 8u entertainment.
So I can only answer no, and then slowly explore and try it myself later, waiting for everyone's feedback.
Q: Why is there always a deus ex machina at the end?
I'm wrong... PVZ brought it up from the beginning, but for Guobao, if God is completely eliminated, there will be no problem in the plot (that's why I only let him appear at the end), and God doesn't play any role.
The meaning of the writing is just a foreshadowing for the entire book. The copy is considered to be logically self-consistent. I don't think it is a deus ex machina.
Q: Are you starting to become a literary youth?
First of all, let me explain that the childhood filter makes me reluctant to write a truly dark plot.
Apart from this book, Lu Xiaoguo and Xiao Guoding are both very interesting characters.
So at the end, I always want to give them a... good death. You have to die, but don't die too badly.
So...
Of course, the most important thing is that people don’t like to watch battles. My battle descriptions have been complained to death. Brothers, the penguins have already demonstrated their abilities in the battle with Xiao Guoding, so there is no need to fight Lu Xiaoguo again. Field.
So I feel better letting him kill himself.
If you think this is a literary youth, don’t worry, it won’t affect the main text.
By the way, there was also a mention of my abuse of the master. I personally don’t think it’s a special calculation. There is no insult at all. It’s at best a ‘trap’. And the result of falling into the trap is actually acceptable to Lin Li. After all, it’s not the one who died. He also achieved his goal.
But if everyone can't accept it, I will modify it.
Let me emphasize again, Lin Li is not a character with a high IQ (the main reason is that the author himself is a fool and cannot write him as high). He can be understood as a slightly arrogant character, which is considered a character design.
Lin Li wants to become smarter, but the biggest obstacle is my brain! ! !
Q: Can you stop hydrology?
A: Sorry or2.
Q: Why has the order been updated recently?
A: Let me explain this. When there is a single update every day, the number of words in a single chapter must be more than 4,000, which is more than usual. It can be understood as two in one.
Of course, if I have to calculate the amount of updates, I do have less than before. It used to be four to five thousand, but now it is more than four thousand. I can’t refute this. I’m sorry, after all, it’s the Chinese New Year and things have become more numerous. After the new year, there will be more I am recovering slowly, please be considerate.
Q: I haven’t watched Fruit World, and the experience of watching the copy is average.
A: This is a problem that is very likely to appear in subsequent copies. The current idea is that I will write a free single chapter for all the pre-viewing instructions for the subsequent world and publish it before the world starts, introducing the characters, world view, etc.
This will deepen the impression of those who have seen it, and make it quick and easy for those who have not seen it in a short time.
The question that arises from this is, what copy should be written later?
Everyone on the World Building gave me a lot of suggestions, and I'm reading them all. There are all kinds of genres, many of which I haven't seen myself. The biggest problem is that some animations or games are "niche" and are really difficult to write about.
After all, a quick viewing experience is not as good as having memories.
It still needs to be more popular.
But I actually had an idea before, which was to integrate worlds and combine several comics into one copy. At first, I wanted to combine Guobao with Pig Man, since they all have mechas, but later I deleted this part.
It may be adopted later to integrate the niche into the public.
Q: About the main world.
A: It’s still a very important part.
Of course I still want to write it well, but the last part was criticized for being written well. But don’t worry, everyone, after returning, the main world will change drastically.
After all, this time, when Lin Li and Jerry were in the dungeon, a certain British shorthair cat was doing whatever he wanted in the main world.
The main purpose last time was to introduce the basic background of the main world and introduce the gray area.
This time we will go straight to the topic. Instead of adjusting what is there and what is not, we will do some subtraction.
To put it bluntly... Dawn City will become Tom (crossed out) and become Lin Li's pocket!
Q: Is there anything else you want to say?
A: Take a day off to sort out the plot of the main world, okay?
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