I originally wanted to talk about it at the end of "PVZ", but now I have left it to this time.
The plot of the main world has come to an end, and the plot of the third copy is about to begin.
Let’s first summarize the gains and losses.
Halfway through writing "PVZ", I became deeply aware of a problem.
There were too few original roles.
In this copy, there are only a few characters that allow me to use my pen and ink to write magic modifications. Leaving aside plants and zombies, I only have Doctor and Dave left to write.
This leads to a problem where there is a lot less drama and less entertainment.
Going around and around, just two things.
In addition, this is a game without a game worldview, which also resulted in too much content that I needed to modify. It was almost like using a "PVZ" skin and telling a story compiled by myself - so I introduced players and gods. .
The consequence of this is that the sense of immersion is not strong and the reader does not have much sense of expectation.
It is very different from the story of "SpongeBob SquarePants" which was born out of the association of the plot itself.
Reflecting on this, I will probably give more consideration to this aspect when choosing future dungeons.
However, I am still satisfied with the overall completion level - it is a bit reluctant. Of course, some of the lines that were originally buried did not make sense after I wrote it.
This book is a process of continuous experimentation.
"SpongeBob SquarePants" is a unit drama, "PVZ" is a pure shell, and the third "Fruit" is a series with a main story line.
The problems of "PVZ" are actually pretty good. In fact, the most important problem in this volume is the main world.
I feel it very intuitively - for example, if the subscription is up to today, it will be cut in half, haha.
But I can still understand it. After all, the current main world has just begun.
For example, the main world is regarded as an independent book. It only has a few tens of thousands of words now. People don’t want to read it, which is somewhat normal.
Of course, the halving of subscriptions is still a serious problem.
I have said before in the writer's words that I will consider the plot distribution of the main world based on the results during the update period.
The current results are terrible, but of course, this does not mean that I have to give up on the main world.
After the third dungeon ends, I will write about the content of the main world as originally planned and introduce the content.
If the results after writing are still not satisfactory compared to the copy, I will definitely have to modify the plan.
There are roughly two directions.
Castrate the main world and turn it into an infinite flow, such as shortening the rest time between copies.
Divide the main world and insert the plot in a more fragmented manner between the dungeons. For example, the content that was originally planned to be told in one gap was divided into two gaps, or even three gaps.
I prefer the latter. Of course, I prefer that there are people in the main world who like it, so I don’t have to make this choice (laughs).
This plot of the main world has been criticized by everyone for being too dinnery, but it's actually not bad.
How about we stop being the male protagonist?
I said in the first chapter that the element that this book will not abandon is fun. I am just an ordinary kid who is still studying for elegant fun that can make me smile.
However, I will control the triggering frequency of the same type of music in the future. If the same type of music is played too frequently, it is easy to raise the threshold and enhance the reader's immunity.
Speaking of immunity, everyone needs to protect themselves during this extraordinary period. Each of the author’s friends is more dangerous than the other, and I feel panicked.
The style of this book is mixed, I must admit, and the overworld doesn't include many elements of a mystery thriller.
One of the advantages of this book is that it is a copy book. People who don't like it can just subscribe and keep the book. It seems...it doesn't really affect it.
Blanch!
Of course, the antenna is here to bang the Big Fire Bang Bang Bang three times. We'd better not jump. We'd better keep a book and open an automatic subscription. I love you.
Those who are rich are allowed to give me money, and those who have no money are not allowed to eat and save money to give me money. Just kidding, in the words of President Fei, it is "Don't affect real life".
Thanks to [Tai Shang Gong], [Qujiuren loose tea is slightly cold], [Delicious Claypot Rice], [Mercury Ancient Five Baht], [Mosheng], [lealy] and others for their rewards.
That's about all I can think of to say. I'm going to take a day off tomorrow to perfect the outline of the copy.
In fact, there is no need to apply. The two chapters updated today total 9,000 words. I can definitely post them in two days. If I ask for leave tomorrow, I will waste a leave application note, but I am too lazy to save it. I will read it in one go. .
And to be honest, I really am not lazy anymore. Nearly 170,000 words have been updated in the 23 days since it was put on the shelves. On average, more than 7,000 words per day. For me, who has slow hand speed and slow brain speed, it is really torture.
By the way, the famous philosopher Wozki once commented: "The Antenna is an author who needs encouragement. His heart is relatively fragile."
The famous ethicist Wo Biande fully agrees with this: "For a street antenna, encouragement can promote his growth more than abuse."
Anyway, I benefited a lot.
No more talking nonsense, see you at 0:00 the day after tomorrow.
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