It’s finally going to be put on the shelves, so I’ll go through the process and write my testimonials.
Let’s talk about this book first. The plot follows the flow of the story. Basically, the plot is laid out at the beginning and the plot is quickly filled in. I think it’s pretty good.
After reading the book reviews, many people couldn’t stand it during the marriage period and said it was toxic.
Some people complain that the first twenty chapters are well written. Even if there are small flaws, it is still a good book. The conflict between Tang Xuan and Tang Xuan who is getting married is inexplicable. Why is there such a content?
What can I say, when I was writing the first twenty chapters, I was afraid that the plot would be too bland, so I wanted to set up a conflict and create a breaking point.
Unexpectedly, one mistake would lead to eternal hatred...
It’s pretty good. Readers who can survive the wedding part should be able to read it later.
It is better to know early on what plot readers (lsp) who like this book like and dislike, and can avoid pitfalls later, than to suddenly have a bad point that dissuades readers after it is put on the shelves.
I basically didn’t delete the criticism about the marriage section in the book review. If no one criticizes a book, that’s really cool.
As for some nonsense, I deleted it.
For example, when the APP was recommended, some people actually said that my writing was so bad that I could still be recommended on the APP. It must have come from PY, the editor.
I was so angry that I laughed. It would be great if there was such an opportunity!
I'll pay for the room! ! !
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It's all a joke...
I can accept it as a normal fan of the plot, but everyone has different tastes.
Of course, the book review said that I was a high school student, which really put me off guard.
Everyone can guess the next plot. It is nothing more than filling in the trap of the battle at Zhenling Pass, as well as the secrets of Jinyang City. A war is inevitable. I am thinking about how to depict that big scene.
As for the protagonist's pretense and slap in the face, don't think about it for now. It's not an invincible novel, nor is it a fantasy novel. How come the protagonist who has just traveled through time can encounter an enemy slightly stronger than himself every time and fight across levels? A slap in the face?
This unscientific!
But my wife must be pretending, oh, she doesn’t have to pretend...
The following is the miserable part...
I had a late night snack yesterday and weighed myself in the morning and gained weight again. All the weight loss I had previously lost was in vain.
Ice cream is getting more and more expensive, and I can't afford it anymore, especially the one named Zhong, it's outrageous.
The general trend of the stock market is not good, which has kept investors on tenterhooks all day long.
Although I don't trade stocks.
Don't speculate anymore, take out the money and just subscribe to mine... ahem.
Let’s get down to business.
I don’t know when the VIP chapter will be opened. Generally it should be at 12 noon on Friday. If the new chapter is not released at 00:00 tonight, there is no need to wait. I will release it at noon tomorrow.
I have saved a few chapters of manuscripts in the past, not many, maybe 10,000 words.
Post five chapters. As the saying goes, short words can only be made up for by the number of times.
Don’t get me wrong, I’m talking about books…
