The Lingnan volume is completed, let’s summarize.
Generally speaking, it may be due to the problem of novices. It is my first time to write, so many places I want to write are not written well.
The first is Plants vs. Zombies in The Land of the Fallen Gods. I originally wanted to write it in more detail, but because I was rushing to take final exams at that time, I had no choice but to speed up the writing and turn it into a solo show for the protagonist.
The second was the inner alchemy experiment. Because of my poor writing skills, I could only write down my own thoughts and end it hastily. As for the social reform originally expected to be brought about by the time traveler's thinking, it was not well reflected.
Third, in the Lingnan battle, the final rhythm was not controlled well.
The longer I write, the more I realize that writing is really a talent. What I think in my head and what I write are completely different things. I cry~
But I can only try to write it down.
The ultimate goal of this book is to write it as interestingly as possible without breaking down the logic too much, and to write out its own characteristics that are different from other immortal cultivators.
Therefore, whether it is every realm above the golden elixir or every battle, I try my best to be completely different from before, instead of using the fireball technique from refining qi to transforming into a god.
As for the background setting, I also abandoned the imitation of other immortal cultivation expeditions to the outer world or the depletion of the world due to ascension, and instead created my own.
Moreover, the major maps are not completely unrelated, and the plot of Lingnan will not end just like this.
Anyway, all in all, try to avoid routines and changing the text.
Therefore, the next Donghai Scroll will not be written in the same way as the Lingnan Scroll, but will be more of a farming novel. The various conjectures raised in the early stage are [Spirit Network], [Spiritual Qi Particle Accelerator], [Nanoscale Factory], [ The unreal world] and so on are constructed, and this is also the core and most abundant part of the book.
Of course, I am going to try to write about the human world that I am least good at, because I found that everyone seems to really like to watch this kind of thing. Although many people say so, the number of subscriptions is very obvious~
But it's so pitiful. I'm just a college student. I've never been out of society. The so-called worldliness is all based on the TV series Kuangbiao. I can only say that I'll try my best. Cry~
As for the heroine, I think this is the best arrangement.
After all, the protagonist will definitely become an immortal in the future. I really can’t figure out how much trouble we should put in Xu Mengyun’s way to make her catch up with the protagonist.
Although the protagonist is also capable of helping her, I think there is no point in cultivating an immortal with a family. Besides, I think not every girl is willing to be a burden to the person she likes.
Besides, I feel that since he is the person that the protagonist can really get along with, he must have his own thoughts, his own dignity, and his own pursuits. And such a character would rather commit himself to being a dragster just to stay with the protagonist. I I also thought it was a bit weird, so I decided to have a good time together. After all, separation is also a normal part of life.
Not to mention, I feel that an unforgettable parting is far more lengthy in terms of emotion and meaning than being by your side.
The Lingnan Volume ends here, and the protagonist will meet more new people in the future.
In the following East China Sea volume, I will write it with reference to the Age of Discovery in Western fantasy, with exploration, war, bloodshed, development, and then the end of everything.
Thank you all for your support, very much appreciated! ! !
