Hello everyone, here is the summary at the end of the volume of Da Lizi's photo of cats and tigers... and some random thoughts.
I write wherever I think. If you see any nonsense like adding more updates, please ignore it.
So first let me talk about my views on the second volume.
At the beginning of this volume, the author's ideas are very grand (I want to put up the New Year's Eve characters, I want to kill Blackbeard, I want to stabilize the hatred of Akainu, I want to make Mo Jingshuai on top A handful, I want, I want, I want...)
Then basically I couldn't finish most of it...
There are too many things I want, but the author’s ability is limited and he can’t handle so much at once.
In addition, it started to deteriorate in the middle. After three days of updating and two days of fishing and posting, the performance dropped seriously, which once made the author think about giving up.
Fortunately, at this time, the author woke up in time, caught up, re-planned the outline, and through his unremitting efforts... it failed for another month.
Well, okay, it's embarrassing, but that's what it is.
If there are readers who have followed up to this point, they must still remember that during that time, the author often sent out requests for leave with unsatisfactory outlines. This was not entirely an excuse. The main reason was that the author himself realized that he wanted to write too much and was rambling here and there. Unfortunately, the plot is too bloated and it is not as concise and attractive as it was at the beginning of the book.
Of course, this does not mean that the author’s ideas are wrong. After all, on the Internet, a single scroll can contain hundreds of thousands of words. It has always been like the single-threaded and fast-paced unit story format used in the book. Everyone will soon get tired. , I feel like this author is always doing this. You can guess the ending just by looking at the beginning.
Therefore, a secondary structure will inevitably be introduced to make the plot of the entire volume ups and downs.
But it's back to the old problem - the author's ability is not good enough.
This can probably be seen from the plot of Mo Jing rescuing Nicholas in the middle period. Although the plots of the Terrifying Three-Mast Sail and the City of Spring Queen are both necessary and pave the way for future stories,
But placed in the entire Blackbeard's revenge line, it seems a bit bloated and redundant.
If I were asked to rearrange, I would probably eliminate these plots and focus on chasing Blackbeard, and then in the process, gain the opportunity to treat Nikolai, or weaken the difficulty of treatment, or simply treat Nikolai Put it after the chase,
Anyway, we can't put it here to distract everyone.
Okay, I admit, at that time I really just wanted to let Nicholas shout henshin, show off his transformation, punch Blackbeard in the face and beat this *** back...
Well, my dream came true,
It's just that the foreshadowing was not done well, and the bloated plot resulted in no contrast between the previous and later episodes, which was a bit regretful.
In short, after realizing his own shortcomings, the author accepted his mediocrity and decided to deal with it one by one. He decided to solve the structural problems in this volume first, and then deal with the other issues in the next volume.
So there was the subsequent fish-man island part, the human auction house part, and the final battle on the top.
The author is still a little satisfied with the rhythm of these three parts.
Especially the final battle on top.
Although the foreshadowing is still very stiff and full of flaws, it still barely achieves the effect.
Especially the chapter where Mo Jing kills Doflamingo, I had a lot of fun writing it (the scene where Mo Jing holds his head and speaks to the world has been replayed in my mind many times).
It can be said that in the top part, except for the ending, which was a little rushed due to time reasons and the author's clever operation, I was still slightly satisfied with the other parts (hehe).
At this point, I can finally say that I have finally touched the threshold of some structure.
From this point of view, the author Jun is indeed not a talented player. It took him about 300,000 words to reach the threshold, and it was only in one direction, alas——
The good news is that a new volume has begun again, and the author can try new tricks again!
The bad news is... well, the outline isn't finished yet... (Is this thing really going to be finished?)
The better news is that the author has a new dream - he decided to refine the character description in this volume and stand up all the miscellaneous fish!
The worse news is that e... I still don’t have a clue on how to do it...
So I'm going to take some time off to collect elements (pop!) (crossed out)...
Ahem, in short, let’s try it while collecting information. Probably due to social fear, the author’s character description is a weak point among the weak points. I hope to improve in this volume.
I also hope that the next volume will bring a better plot to everyone and make everyone happy to watch it.
(Please give me a vote by the way)
over~
