Thanks to [Hidden Sword of Hidden Sword Village] [Worst Wine] and [I Think You’re a Scam] for their tips. They are all old friends. Thank you.
Thanks to [GakkiStar] [Where are the fellow Taoists in front] [Gator] [Kana Shenhua] [Mr. Qiu Dao H] [Misty Rain·-_-·Piaoxue] [jzyslove] [My Teeth Are White] and several others for their monthly votes.
And everyone who has voted for recommendation for a long time, [Agate Jade] [P19] [yangkiesao] [Yykks001] [Spiritual Sword Xiao Meng] [Qi Ling Xiao Han lyndon] [Laugh without saying a word] [Bloodshed Face to Face] [Knowing Heroes with Wisdom Eyes] [ Centipede Drinking Wedding Wine] [Snail Dwelling in the World] [llydy] [Virtual Gravity] [TEMPLE] [Old Thief Sima Hao]... I'm really sorry that I can't type the name of every friend who supports me, it's too long Yes, well, I have to blame Qidian for not developing a function to automatically extract everyone’s ID. 【Dog head】
And all the friends, alliance leaders, helmsmen, protectors who support this book...
Love you guys!
I originally wanted to sleep together when we had time, but I was worried that a female reader would sue me for harassment.
This period of time is not much, only about 4,000 to 5,000 words per day, and everyone can keep reading, which really makes Lao Sui completely stop the eunuch's thoughts.
Hahahaha....Is it so difficult to be a eunuch?
Just kidding, don't take it seriously.
It's a bit lacking, Lao Sui admitted this, and deeply reflected on it (I punished myself with a good meal at night)... I still remember the message [Lyndon] gave me, talking about my book It would definitely be much better if we could update it three times a day. This eldest brother and several others have been voting for me. My records show that many friends have voted for me continuously for more than half a year.
There is nothing I can do in return, I can only work hard later and update as much as possible.
Although Lao Sui's book is not enough to support his family, he has ordered some now, which can increase his income every month, which makes Lao Sui very happy.
As I wrote more and more, I still summed up a lot of experiences.
This book lacks some characterization, and the slow pace at the beginning is mostly due to writing problems, as the characters were not finalized in time through the story. Among the three elements of character and storyline, Lao Sui is always too attached to the plot part due to habit issues. The story is average, but the characters are much different...
This is an experience written down, or a lesson learned.
However, this can be considered progress. At least if you are aware of the problem, you can continue to improve.
Regarding the unpredictable protagonist, Laosui's character design is similar to the "little guy, cunning" type, but kindness and the sense of right and wrong must be hidden deep in the heart, and never break through easily.
As for the portrayal of characters, especially the protagonist's personality, it is often affected to some extent by the author's own personality. After living for more than thirty years, Lao Sui has a very thorough analysis of himself. Lao Sui himself is a person who does not like to argue. , does not like to be serious, and is more Buddhist in some things. This will have some conflicts with the protagonist's setting, but it is inevitably reflected in the protagonist, making readers feel that the character does not seem to be motivated...
In fact, this is also Lao Sui's own attitude towards life. The life Lao Sui longs for is a peaceful life in the mountains and wilds without fighting against the world. This may be due to his age. He has experienced too much and seen too many dark sides of people's hearts. Somewhat tired. Of course, Lao Sui’s three views are still very upright. Please rest assured that you will not encounter any insurmountable poisonous points.
Therefore, it is understandable that it is difficult for many young readers to have this mentality and not understand the projection of Laosui's character on the protagonist.
Until I write more and more, some problems will come naturally...
As for the unpredictable protagonist, you can rest assured that he is barely a good guy! Moreover, his ability is related to his obsession, and his behavior pattern is fraud... Please don't get too entangled or believe some of the things Mo Zhi said in the article. You may have been deceived by him and become his rapid promotion. Level experience monster.
However, this is also a very interesting thing. Some readers are too honest and are always deceived by Mozhi. They argue with Lao Sui that Mozhu is too poisonous. Well, without explanation, let them continue to be deceived by Mozhu. Those left in this way are the real readers of this book. 【】
There should be more updates later! I haven't been sleeping well. I had a high fever a few days ago and my condition is very bad. Fortunately, I have recovered during this period. From tomorrow on, I will adjust my daily routine and try to make updates more regular. Don't rush to 11 every day like before. Post before and after clicking.
I will work hard!
