In the past few days, I have been revising the text of these 62 chapters. I found that the plot was stiff and the presentation method was inappropriate, so I revised it.
It has been replaced to Chapter 19 (updated twice a day, using reasonable parts of the original version, and will be updated three times if conditions permit). It is equivalent to a rewrite. Compared with the original version, the gap is huge, and the main plot remains unchanged. Training in thousands of mountains and fighting in ruins, but the length is extended to more express the theme of the wasteland under reconstruction, using a lot of elements from the 1960s and 1970s.
Personally, I am very satisfied with the new version. The scenes, character descriptions, plot advancement, and foreshadowing have all reached a relatively good level.
My works have never been cool. I intend to write in depth and combine knowledge with practice. I know that writing this way will delay the manuscript fee, but the writing is better and the writing is at ease. It is suitable for all writers who want to call themselves writers calmly. pursuit.
Other modifications are to eliminate the subplot and present it only from Shen Rusong's perspective. Gu Xiuyun will enter the plot in the middle of the story.
The writing style changes to a realistic and down-to-earth military life and battle, pursuing as much reality and rigor as possible.
The update is placed in the extra chapter, "Black Mountain Rising Sun", which will also enter the plot with side stories in the future. And, best wishes in the old age, and wish all readers good luck in the Year of the Tiger.
