As mentioned, I will take leave today and tomorrow to stop updating. Because I am busy with my own graduation ceremony, I probably won't have time to update all day long.
This is the first thing.
The second thing is the whole story of what happened yesterday. It took me a long time to figure out what happened.
"cause"
On the afternoon of the day before yesterday (6.17), a new comment was added to the book circle. The general idea is that there are many bugs and unreasonable things in my plot. The specific problem has been deleted by this person and I don’t know about this forum. Do you have any readers screenshots?
Most of the questions that s/he (Melancholy Squid Y) felt were unreasonable were ones that I had already explained in the book, and I could only be a TA for so long that I forgot about them. And I also made reference to the original work of Mystery, which may seem unreasonable, but it is not fabricated out of thin air. At the time of your comment, I immediately responded and reassured you, explained some of the questions and said that some of the details you asked would be explained in a subsequent series. At the same time, there is another reader who keeps commenting to help him answer questions, but it seems that the communication is not going well. He also politely expressed his understanding and gratitude for my reply, said that my writing was very good, and wished me better and better writing.
As expected, things ended here.
As a result, when I woke up, on the morning of the 18th yesterday, a friend sent me a message saying that someone was hanging on me in Tieba.
"go through"
Continuing with the above, on the morning of the 18th, a friend sent a screenshot and expressed concern (you are so popular). The tone of the post posted by this reader with the ID "Dreamer" was very offensive and full of subjective emotions. I didn't think about it for a while. Thinking of what I did wrong, you want to say this to me.
Let me state in advance that because the tone of the two people is so different, I did not expect the title of this post at all, "The Outer God Vest Sequence Approaches Xiao Ke from the Sequence 7 Period in Bay City and Kills Him", and the introduction "I recently read a book Fan, the plot makes me question... When should this vest die?" The person who politely talked to me in the book club and praised my books was actually the same person.
This chapter is free, so you can get everything you want. I’ll list all his questions for everyone to see.
Here are the questions he asked and the settings for this article:
1. Half of the source of the Decline King of Outer Gods is on the earth. He captured a soul from the old era (Celestial Dynasty), and separated a clone to devour and fuse it. Using this as a loophole to pass through the barrier, the Baizao period entered Earth(??).
2. This vest chose the devil sequence and rose all the way to sequence two, followed by Russell to conquer the world and killed an Adam personality clone who came to recover when Lao Huang died. It seems that he also killed the angel of the sun and captured a Amon sequenced three clones and successfully escaped the seven gods' encirclement and suppression of Lao Huang's remaining forces.
3. Later, Ma Jia hooked up with Zhenzao and became an angel of the Aurora Society. During the Klein 008 incident, he killed 008 and the captain and scored the captain's soul. (Klein did not see this devil angel)
(MMD can you please say Demon Angel, Demon, Demon! If you have to use one of the potions as the sequence name, I will call it Klein Clown Angel from now on.)
4. By rescuing Medici and reaching a cooperation with Zhenzao, he helped Ma Jia kill an original Nandalu Demon Sequence One blessed by the Mother Tree (Clan Chief Beria: Thank you for giving me the upgrade.) and successfully upgraded to Sequence One ( Do you think this is reasonable?)
5. He caused various troubles in Bay City, killed Karen (I have too much to say) and cursed to death a bunch of related noble high-ranking officials with demonic whispers over the phone.
6. After Xiao Ke came to Bay City, Devil Angel Vest solved Xiao Ke as an old fellow, and Xiao Ke also knew that he was Devil Angel. The clone of Amon, who was captured before because of communicating with the Source Castle, felt the aura of the Source Castle and found Klein. (At this time I thought it was just Tianzun’s fish)
7. The outrageous thing is coming (the outrageous thing is indeed coming), omitting some details, the vest communicates with the external body (?) and invades the Yuanbao with source matter (??) and Amon, and finally confirms that the Yuanbao is in Klein's hands , and even speculated on the existence of the Tarot Society, but we still don’t know who they are.
8. In the end, he went directly to Klein's door and made a devil's deal by giving him a door-to-door gift and killed Xiao Ke directly. During the process, he also gave the captain's soul to Xiao Ke and left, not knowing that he would be resurrected.
9. Xiao Ke was resurrected and held a meeting. He noticed and communicated with his true body (I was speechless) and prepared to enter Source Castle, but the goddess helped and refused.
So here’s my question. According to the logic of the original work, when do you think this Outer God Vest will die?
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After typing this sentence, I feel that my soul has been sublimated.
Let's take a look at how many mistakes he made, and you can judge for yourself how subjective he is.
1 Directly opening the lightning strike, let me put it bluntly, if it really entered the earth during the White Creation period, if Decay was not killed, then there would be nothing to do with the Bound God or the Bound God in the later generations.
When I saw this post that was full of errors, my first reaction was speechless. I was speechless. You thought so many things were unreasonable and you didn’t even think of flipping through it and reading it again. You even confidently shared the plot of this article on the post bar, causing most of the comments section to be full of people. It's spraying me.
I briefly browsed the discussion last night, and this brother felt that if he didn’t report the author’s name and the title of the book, it wouldn’t be considered cheating.
Brother, the thing on your neck is a brain, not a tumor. Can you find the second one after searching through the secrets in the plot of this article? What's the difference between calling someone by name? Are you pretending not to be able to see my whims about spraying me down there? What are you talking about?
And you wrote in the title, "Outer God Vest"! You spoiled the biggest secret as soon as you came up, so the posts on the forums are basically based on the outer gods. Then the old love is indeed dead! Of course it is impossible for Zhenzao to cooperate with foreign gods! You've seen everything you wanted to see.
So, why do you think Decay has to create a human skin for himself, imitate humans, marry a wife and have children, and go through promotion rituals? Why? Is it because Edward is handsome?
(So far, I don’t know that he is the melancholic squid Y who is very polite in the book circle)
His posts and comments make me feel toothache and stupid.
Moreover, the post he posted on Tieba is not famous enough that everyone in the best friend circle knows about it. You are discussing my personal settings with a group of people who have never read the book. Do you really want to discuss it?
Look at the confusing replies below: "Sequence One still wants to do big things?" "Why does the King of Decay want to be a demon?" "Isn't this just pure self-pleasure" and other more disgusting words, you have to worry about your conscience Ask yourself, are you really going there with a discussion mentality?
Therefore, the top comment in the "" discussion thread appeared at the top of the book circle:
A Tieba user who made a lot of comments on Twitter said: "I haven't read the book, but I'm just unhappy that he killed Xiaoke once."
Don't you really want to seek recognition or simply want to see me get scolded?
"turning point"
This was almost naming me, and of course I was very angry. I explained it in the book circle.
My replies are visible in the book circle. Of course I won't go to the forum. Why should I go there and get scolded in person just to satisfy your selfishness? And I have to explain myself to the person who scolded me. I have a brain.
As for my explanation, he replied via airmail 8 minutes later:
"No matter how round it is, it can't be explained that the goddess and Adam allowed a problematic devil angel to approach Klein in Backlund and even used an Amon clone to come to the Source Castle. This is completely contrary to logic and is equivalent to a direct GG from the earth. "
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I think you can make one thing clear first, that is, the goddess is not your mother.
I also answered this question in this chapter of the previous chapter. The goddess and Adam acquiesced in Tingen's divine descent, which is equivalent to Tingen being a "necessary sacrifice" for your brother and sister, almost ordinary people in the city, your captain, members and even other churches The team is all necessary sacrifices, and of course, you, Klein, too. Do you really think the goddess cares about Klein's life and death in the early stage? What solved Megoos was Klein's two sun charms. Where did the sun talisman come from? It was only discovered through divination in Source Castle.
In other words, if there is no Klein, or if Klein does not discover the spell, then the divine descent will be successful. When the evil god comes, the disaster is difficult to predict, and Moretti’s family may die. So why do you think the goddess cares about Klein? Where is his life? Monitoring all day long?
As for Adam, it's even funnier. Whom Adam supported, it was always Amon.
At the end of the explanation, I found that he was still insisting on everything except "How could Shinzo, the human side of Yuota, cooperate with the devil (Aurora Society: Do you remember that we are one of the bloody cults)", and he was biting it to death. "The foreign god can actually reduce the power of his body through the barrier, and can also use his own source material to go to the Source Castle." This question is.
One person said that my eyes went dark when I saw this question.
You actually still think that decay can reduce power through barriers, and can also contact the source of outer space on the earth.
Are you Alger? Is the power of decline a figment of your own imagination? ?
Answer 1: If power can be reduced through barriers, then why do you think Decay 0 has to come down and act as a human to take risks? Wouldn't it be nice to have Edward completely remote-controlled from outer space? Why? Because the earth’s scenery is good?
Question 2: Why don’t you watch 100 again? When did you use sefirot? ? When did you use the body? ? ? How many times have I said that it was because Klein directly divined the decline that he could exert influence in the opposite direction? ?
I have deep doubts about the reader's reading comprehension ability, and as you can see, in the previous chapter, I answered these mind-numbing questions in more detail (up to 500 words in this chapter).
And at the end of the sentence, I suddenly felt blessed and had a question:
"How do you think there are so many unreasonable things now? Why do you insist on the issue of killing Shangyuan Castle? (Even the method of Shangyuan Castle that he thinks is unreasonable was imagined by himself. The logic is closed loop. Yes), is it because you can’t accept killing Klein?”
Later that day, I got a response:
"What I want to express is what I think is a problem with the logic of this book, rather than provoking a confrontation between the so-called small fans of the book and the fans of this book, as the author is now doing."
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Not asking for it?
Let’s not talk about anything else. I originally wrote 2.67 million words on a completely free platform. I signed a contract with Qidian.com and then transferred it. I can write so much for Aiden for free, and I also communicate with readers every day when I come to Qidian. Chat, what do you really think I’m here for? I would rather only a few friends read this article, than say that there are "fans of this book". Don't you know who is involved in the rice circle?
Having said that, you are really good at wearing the hat.
At the same time, this comment was posted in the book circle, so I finally found out that it turned out that this "melancholy squid Y" who always spoke politely and praised my writing was the one who posted in the post bar and caused the cloud readers to have fun. My "visionary".
You do one thing in front of your face and another behind your back, and you use strong words to criticize me. You are really not a good person.
"result"
After fighting in the air for a day, he ended up deleting the book and running away.
He probably ran away. If you have other channels to read the article, you can also see this chapter.
If you come back and read this chapter, don't feel aggrieved. When you feel that "not reporting the title of the book or the author is not a big deal," you write a book about my original plot, and what happened after I discovered it. And when you express your dissatisfaction and then say "Awesome, the original work forum can't discuss fan settings?", you deserve to be scolded by me.
Thank you for your full subscription. I will never see you again. It will harm other authors. Just read the articles you want to read.
