Hello everyone, I am Beer Dolphin. First of all, I wish you all a happy Lantern Festival.
I'm a little excited and embarrassed to call myself a temporary pen name like this, but more importantly, I'm excited - it's time to take the initiative to chat with everyone for a while.
This book has been serialized so far, with 144 chapters and 330,000 words, which completes the first volume. To be honest, it is longer than I thought.
In the beginning of these 300,000 words, I am constantly learning and pondering, trying to polish this story to be more like what I imagined.
And during this process, I intuitively felt the pressure brought by the results and popularity at the starting point - as an author, I naturally hope that the stories I create will be read by more people, which will inevitably lead to conflicts with Grades are tied.
Therefore, you can probably read that I made many subtle attempts. My initial description was to create some sense of lens, but because the writing power and rhythm control were not very good, it seemed very slow and very slow. It was lengthy. After I could see the results intuitively after it was put on the shelf, I spurred myself to make some more changes. Later, I could even see that I wanted to mix some upgrade elements.
These attempts may not be successful. I must apologize to everyone for those parts that even I don’t feel good about after trying them. I must also thank everyone for their tolerance of continuing to read.
There are some things that I don’t understand. The mix of skill mechanisms, equipment and game content looks weird and boring. I have to say that this is too normal and I’m sorry - I haven’t thought about these contents very clearly, and I don’t want to really think about them. I spent a lot of time and energy describing these contents, because from the beginning, I felt that this should not be a book that lists calculated values and drives for equipment and treasure hunting.
So, what kind of book should this be?
It is on the game channel. Readers who don’t have many game fans have finished scanning the LOL fanfics, added some articles about the cool equipment system, clicked on the book and closed it - the content they want to see is not here, even if There were some sporadic attempts, but they were also shoddy and failed to live up to expectations.
It is not that straightforward and closely follows the hot mainstream. Many of the words are not about the protagonist, and there is no happy element such as the system issuing tasks. The camera changes frequently, and the reading is much more detailed.
Is it a fictional historical deduction? No, at least the layout design is very simple, because I know how much I weigh, and if I’m not good at something I don’t like, I won’t be able to write well, so it doesn’t have that flavor.
In this way, although I have avoided some of the weird pitfalls of online articles, I have inevitably walked into many other forks. After filtering through the layers, it is really gratifying and shameful that there are still living people following and interacting with them. .
If my interest is maintained, then this book will mean a lot to me and will be of great help to other books I want to write in the future.
There are still ninety-nine and eighty-one difficulties in obtaining scriptures from the Western Heaven, and Han Dongwen is the whetstone I most desire. I want to learn more from this book while retaining my own characteristics, so that I can produce better stories in the future—— It may not be Han Dongwen’s story.
So, those who give me this opportunity to learn and improve are the readers who keep reading and subscribing (bow)
After finishing the book, in addition to discovering problems, I also often think about what makes me attractive.
The narrative is fairly smooth (you think)?
The character creation is quite three-dimensional and quite likable (you think)?
The plot doesn’t have silly bubblings (think)?
Then I will write a story about beast control in my next book. Golden Finger is about cooking to make the pet beasts evolve, eating hot pot to evolve in the direction of the flames, and so on. I can also write about gourmet food. How happy it is to think about it, hahaha.
Okay, the above is just nonsense. This book has just begun. I want to make a promise here. I will adjust the parts that everyone obviously thinks are average and boring, and work hard in the direction that I am comfortable writing and everyone is comfortable reading.
After all, when upgrading the alt here, learning skills, etc., I directly wrote a pain mask for myself, and had to rely on all the work of tearing the winter fist to adjust myself, which is really inappropriate.
Thank you all for your support. Originally, I could take a holiday after completing one volume, but as a newbie, I wanted to try out what it feels like with full attendance, so I will continue to update from Thursday.
Please stay tuned for the next content of "It's Broken, I'm a Fool". If there are any recommended monthly passes, please buy more and feel more of everyone's encouragement!
[Volume 2: The Tribulation of Kings]
