It's time for a single chapter. The plot of the first volume is basically over.
In fact, from the beginning, judging from the first chapter, the protagonist has died twice, and the tone originally planned to be written was rather depressing.
It's just that I didn't describe how miserable the protagonist was in detail, but I wrote that although his talent was average, he had worked hard for 14 years and finally mastered the system. He killed enemies in the previous battles to obtain equipment, and carefully synthesized it. After acquiring three resurrection armors, he finally succeeded in changing from cannon fodder to 'elite'. After all, the Uchiha bloodline was there, and it was a qualitative change as soon as he opened his eyes.
But after I finished writing Chapter 1, I realized that I couldn’t write Darkness.
It’s not that the protagonist is calm and selfish, but decisive in killing, it’s the flow of darkness. I think the flow of darkness is mainly due to the overall atmosphere. In that kind of environment, for oneself and for survival, people have to change with the environment.
Maybe my understanding of dark current is wrong.
Especially when I decided that Goldfinger is based on Teamfight Tactics and the Alliance skill system, it would be very inconsistent if I made the atmosphere very depressing.
So after hesitating for a second, I added a cheerful and optimistic character to the protagonist, but he became mature after experiencing a cruel war.
However, if this change is reflected through the plot, it will appear very demoralizing and embarrassing if it is not handled well, so I will mention it in one sentence.
But after adding this setting, the character of the protagonist in the whole story is basically determined.
The best reference for the protagonist is Namikaze Minato, but he is a darker version of Minato Namikaze, with a little more sense and calculation, and he treats his enemies like old silver coins.
His originally optimistic and cheerful personality changed due to the harsh living environment, and he became calm and rational. When the environment improved again, he would not change back to before, but after experiencing the darkness, he yearned for the sunshine more.
Logically, the protagonist will definitely like people like Namikaze Minato.
Coupled with the identity of the Uchiha clan, from the perspective of interests, it is necessary to save Namikaze Minato.
In terms of personality, daily interactions, and personal feelings, I want to save Namikaze Minato.
Therefore, the main plot of the first volume is to become stronger and change one's own situation. When the strength reaches the first level, it changes from oneself to the larger environment. It is necessary to change the fate of Uchiha and change the village. So from before Namikaze Minato appeared, I I thought about saving him, so I arranged a plot to perform a mission together (Naruto and Kakashi don't turn dark, it's really outrageous!)
If you save people both publicly and privately, there will be no flaws in your logic (mainly when watching anime, that episode really made me cry, Obito is such a dog!)
When I was preparing to save Namikaze Minato and Windbending Swordsmanship, the tone of this article should be on the lighter side. The standard in my heart was not to be mentally retarded, not to be a holy mother, and not to abuse the Lord.
Therefore, the plot that was originally planned to include the protagonist encountering the resurrection armor again in the battle was deleted. On the contrary, a lot of equipment was added to him appropriately.
The emergence of the [Wuji Way] meditation method allows the protagonist to open his eyes without the need for family members and friends to sacrifice to heaven.
As for the plot before the Nine-Tails Rebellion, I would give myself a 6, which is a passing grade.
The protagonist's strength increases, he is recognized by his friends and companions, and he gets acquainted with Namikaze Minato, preparing for the future. The two develop a relationship of master, disciple, friend, and comradeship.
As for the plot of the Nine-Tails Rebellion, preparations start from chapter 53 and end at chapter 69, with 16 chapters in between.
I give myself a 7 for this plot, which I wrote relatively smoothly and satisfactorily. Of course, this plot was also criticized a lot.
Others said water.
Actually what is written in these 16 chapters.
Chapter 58 writes the Four Elephants Seal, which officially solves the problem of Kakashi's Sharingan. This was prepared more than ten chapters ago. Because Kakashi's good friend died, he was asked to accept the sealing of the Sharingan. Things require a process of psychological preparation, so I did not write the process in detail, but left a span of more than ten chapters to change him through time migration.
In the middle, the sweet daily life of the Namikaze Minato family and the darkness of Obito are used to increase the contrast.
The more beautiful something is, the more uncomfortable it is when it is destroyed.
Of course I won’t really seek death!
Only in this way will the final reversal be more meaningful.
When I wrote [Crazy Outlaw Armor] earlier, I decided on the plot of the protagonist becoming the Nine-Tailed Jinchuuriki.
Because if I write [Resurrection Armor], the protagonist will not get any substantial benefits, and the same is true for redemption, and the fanatic can accelerate the growth of the protagonist's strength in a few months before using it on Kushina, so I He wrote about practicing the Eight Gates of Armor and Taijutsu, and then told Minato Namikaze with a reason that was more convincing (deceiving).
After all, the protagonist cannot suffer (the author’s will)
But the premise of all this is the trust cultivated over the past year. Otherwise, although Namikaze Minato has no prejudice against the Uchiha clan, it is still logical to use kaleidoscope and 'dream' to tell him about the breaking of the Nine-Tails seal. question.
Then even after making so many preparations, Obito succeeded.
On the one hand, it is naturally caused by man-made disasters (the author's malice). On the other hand, the protagonist knows that Obito will cause trouble on October 10, but he does not know that Zetsu will come (I watched Naruto three times before noticing that Nine The plot of the Seal of the Tail Rebellion), for those who have not watched Naruto, or have not finished it, this plot naturally needs to be written in more detail. In order to increase conflicts and surprises, Black and White Zetsu has been added.
At the same time, he didn’t know that Danzo would stab him in the back (the old pot king)
The protagonist's setting is to know the basic plot, but not the detailed process.
In the original story, Naruto was captured and Obito used the detonating talisman. I changed it to Lake Biwa and was captured. If I wanted to be darker, Minato Namikaze could not have saved her, so the White Zetsu clone threatened Kushina's life at this time. That makes sense.
In fact, if this plot insists on making a difference, it is why Jiraiya, the third generation, and the fourth generation are not concentrated at one production point. This can only use the protagonist's own way of thinking.
He wanted to help Namikaze Minato, but he couldn't expose too much, because he could use dreams to explain the Kyuubi, but he couldn't force Jiraiya and the three generations to be in the same place. After all, he was just a Jonin of Uchiha. Namikaze Minato could do whatever he wanted, but he couldn't do it now.
It was Minato Namikaze who decided on the two production points, one true and one false. The protagonist had the right to make suggestions, but not the right to decide.
Moreover, neither Obito nor Zetsu can enter the high-level barrier used at the production point without a mole. From a God's perspective, Zetsu discovered that the barrier naturally seemed to be broken easily and there were so many preparations, but in fact, It was only possible with the help of the inner ghost and Jue.
Strong fortresses are easier to breach from the inside.
Moreover, only writing in this way can the protagonist benefit unintentionally. Of course, this is not the main purpose. Isn’t the love of the fourth generation couple enviable (I’m not bitter). The fourth generation died just to die for love!
If Obito failed to be written directly, the fourth generation couple was saved, but it was peaceful and there were no twists and turns.
Moreover, the plot that will move to Danzo later will be postponed. In the meantime, Danzo will be made to feel sick for a while, which is unpleasant.
In fact, I think if it were a little more expanded, I could give myself 8 points, but what's the biggest point deduction for this plot?
It’s because the climax of the plot is 6 chapters, and it takes at least two days to write, usually three days. This leads to broken chapters and abuse of the protagonist. This is the biggest problem! I deliberately added more updates during this period, and I also hope to finish writing it as soon as possible. If I hadn't been criticized so much, I would have finished six chapters in one day.
It was obviously a near-miss experience of life and death, and everyone was happy in the end, with Obito being severely injured; Zetsu's abilities were exposed; many of the four generations of the family were reunited, and they even planned to practice a trumpet; the protagonist was happy to mention Erha; the group was carried away Hidden; the fate of Uchiha changed; the fourth generation began to take control of the village and cultivate influence; so it is necessary to break the chapter... Although I did not mean it, the established facts are like this, and it seems that this plot is a bit sadistic , but the ending is that Minato Namikaze has a second life in both family and career. The protagonist also gains huge benefits from this, and the two become true like-minded people.
From the beginning of the second volume, the fourth generation and the protagonist flex their muscles, the fourth generation takes care of the top management, the protagonist takes care of the Uchiha, and Annei fights against the outside world.
Begin to conquer the ninja world and maintain nuclear peace.
Imagine that Minato Namikaze takes the lead with the golden sparkle, Jiraiya takes care of himself and occasionally assists, and the new generation of protagonists leads the way, cultivating an enhanced version of 55 (evolved 64), an enhanced Itachi, and an enhanced Shisui. In the future, fights, Uchi A group of people from the Bo clan started fighting in Gundams.
Who is dissatisfied?
Konoha's new generation F4 will go to your house to have a long chat with you.
The plot is about to find a partner for the protagonist in the near future.
In addition, Erha also needs to be trained. After all, no matter how cold-blooded the tailed beast is, her insides are always wet and hot.
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Considering that some people have watched Naruto, have never played League, or have never played Teamfight Tactics (after all, it is S4, there are not many people who have played all the time), so I have added a lot of explanatory text in front of it, which is a bit verbose, But I am not a fool. After all, excluding the explanatory text, my chapter is more than 2000 by the standard.
Everything that needs to be explained is explained before it is put on the shelf, and no further explanation is needed after it is put on the shelf (even so, some readers still leave comments that they are unclear). Since I said that not having played the game does not affect reading, then I must take care of more people.
After all, it has to be right. If more people see it, in terms of percentage, more people will be able to subscribe after it is put on the shelf.
If it goes away because of my plot, I have nothing to say, because my personal taste is different, but if it goes away because I haven’t played the game and can’t understand it, then I’ll be at a loss.
Let me reiterate: This book is being recommended on Channel 6. Recommendation votes and follow-up reading are very important. The opportunity for newbies to go to Sanjiang is in everyone's hands. I will lift Danzo away, aren't you ready to lift me up? ?
As for adding an update, I will add one update for every 3,600 recommendation votes before it is released. Considering that your voting speed is too slow, I only have the opportunity to add an update a week (no, little brother, little sister), so I decided to directly For the existing manuscript, you don’t have to add updates slowly like squeezing out toothpaste, and return it when it’s on the shelf. If I can go to Sanjiang and add ten chapters, it’s not up to me to decide whether I owe twenty or thirty chapters before it goes on the shelf.
Finally, I hope that everything goes well with the three consecutive projects (investment, voting, and rewards). Rewards are as you wish. The main thing is votes before it is put on the shelves!
The current rewards are accumulated until they are put on the shelves, and when the time comes, more will be added according to the general practice of Qidian.
I didn’t expect that just writing a single chapter would cost nearly 3K.
Mengxin's last book of 100,000 words only got 200 votes on the recommendation list, and there was not even a ghost in the comment section. The results of this book exceeded expectations, so I will do my best to write it well. Please rest assured.
In addition, as for some people saying that dialogue and fighting are not good at writing...then I can only write slowly, practice slowly, and try to control the length as much as possible.
PS: If you have any comments about this book, please leave a message in the comment area. There are too many TFT and Alliance equipment heroes for one person to think of. In terms of plot, you can also bring it up (I’m not the kind of person who copies book reviews)
PS: The vast majority of people pay more attention to their quality and speak more tactfully. For the few who go a little too far, I can only quietly ban them for 7 days in the background, and then explain them after a minute. It must be uncomfortable to be said. I reflected on it all in the background, corrected it if it happened, and encouraged it if it didn't. I can only carry him to see Danzo with the fragrance coming out of my mouth!
PS: There must be diaomao who said that if I write such a long single chapter, I might as well code another chapter.
Do you think I can really be provoked by such a simple thing? I insisted on writing it myself, show it to me! Please don't be ignorant of praise.
PS: I really wrote it and added an update. Where are the tickets? (Put the public screen on Geili)
