Just resumed the new chapter update, more ink will be posted

First of all, I would like to thank book friend xxxx7553 for giving me some opinions.

Then in the afternoon I read the most recent chapters carefully.

Three points of opinion.

The first one is about one sentence and one paragraph.

I thought about this carefully. When I wrote it last year, someone complained that my writing looked like square prose. Because on the computer, as long as you write two lines, it takes more than half a screen on the mobile phone.

Because of this, I later changed it to one or two sentences as much as possible.

But this habit is definitely wrong when it appears in the description of the female ghost's appearance.

I will carefully adjust it tonight. I have read what other book friends recommended in the past few days, and I also plan to work hard to strengthen the description of the appearance.

Second, these chapters always emphasize Zhang Tiandao's timidity.

I write articles recently in paragraphs. Every time I write, I feel like I just mentioned it, but after uploading it together, I found that it seems quite wordy.

I will revise it tonight and pay attention to it in the future.

The third one is about the setting of ghosts.

emmmmm, before I wrote, I had a construction system, which is different from most mental attacks and physical attacks that have a one-size-fits-all exemption method. Because if that's the case, I feel like there's something wrong and imbalanced.

Spoiler alert!

I read a book about exorcism, which divided ghosts into two categories: resentful spirits born from evil consequences, and fierce ghosts caused by evil consequences.

As for combat, I borrowed its theory.

Divide ghosts into three states: mind, consciousness, and form.

One is the mind, which is attached to any substance. It has no thoughts of its own, cannot see anything, and cannot hurt anything. In a sense, it is an invincible existence, but it also poses no threat. Similar to entering hibernation.

The second is consciousness, which has thoughts and lucid dreams. It can be hurt and can hurt others. But there are strict restrictions on how to harm others, which will not only consume your own Xiu Wen and Yin Qi. Moreover, the other party's yang energy is sufficient, his spirit is stable and strong, and he is cautious, so there is nothing he can do.

The third is shape, which directly has the appearance and the state of entity. There will be a certain distortion in appearance, or some special abilities will be retained. In this state, you can hurt others in the world, but you are also exposed to your origin. Every second you are exposed will damage your cultivation level, and you can also be physically harmed.

Finally, eh.

About why a grape makes a ghost look like this.

①: Zhang Tiandao’s clothes settings.

②: Backpack setting.

③: Magician psychology.

I don’t know if I can roughly understand this idea. TAT