Reconstruction progress report, June 12

[Current progress: Chapter 40 of the first volume. The first volume is basically completed. It took one week. 】

The first volume probably reviews the content related to adjustments.

①: Chen Min highlighted his early foreshadowing and strengthened his intention to reduce the number of team members.

②: The logic of counterattack after being harassed by gangsters has been adjusted. Before the change, Liu Ziyun did not speak when the gangsters started harassing him, which was strange.

③: The logic of Liu Ziyun’s fight in the tavern has been enhanced because the previous fight’s sense of direction and movement was not smooth.

④: The dialogue of the Sheriff’s fine plot has been fine-tuned, and details of the fine have been added, highlighting that the security of the town is very unfair and will not make decisions about trivial matters at all.

⑤: Glenn's character is slightly adjusted, timid and cowardly → nervous and panicked, because people who can commit suicide are not completely timid.

⑥: At Jiekou, Tang Jiumin questioned Chen Min about the details of the dialogue. Tang Jiumin's attitude: directly revealed the hint → almost made it clear. Chen Min’s status: He was violent when exposed → he felt at ease even though he was being hinted at.

(The sixth point has been adjusted a bit more, because after careful personal evaluation, Boss Chen needs to be stronger, and Tang Jiumin does not need to reveal it at all, because in principle they are the same kind of people.)

⑦: Pierce’s transaction plot, a lot of nonsense has been removed, the Sheriff’s Department plot has been simplified, and the logic has been corrected.