Under reconstruction, progress will be reported every Monday from now on

I'm officially back. In the next two years, unless I get married, nothing special will happen.

Um, I haven’t written in a long time, and I’ve lost all the outlines.

I almost forgot the previous article, so I am rebuilding it.

In order to avoid some people thinking that I am a eunuch, I will make an announcement every Monday from now on to explain where the reconstruction has been.

I have read a lot during this period, so when I looked back at the previous chapters, I felt that many of the sentences, dialogues, and fights were too rough and could be improved.

So now is the reconstruction period, and I will revise about 3-4 chapters every day.

In addition to repeated revisions, another key point is to discover some underlying setting issues in the outline.

Although this thunder has not exploded yet, I have a feeling that if I continue to write like this, it will explode before the 10th copy.

It would be too deliberate to patch up the settings and fix the loopholes at that time, so I just modified it now.

Let’s talk about the adjustments involved in the revision.

①: Add appearance descriptions of characters and environment descriptions to avoid being too monotonous.

②: Adjust the connection between dialogue and scene transitions, and try to remove some wordy words.

③: Fully flesh out the characters of the supporting characters and fine-tune the details to avoid being abrupt.

④: The mind crystal system will be adjusted, involving some responses in the camp chapter, so as to avoid leaving any hidden dangers.

⑤: The inheritance system will be fine-tuned to clarify skills and later growth needs.

⑥: In the second story, the key plot of Yefim that was missing when uploading will be corrected.

【Current progress】

First Story, Chapter 16 (Completed)

Current story adjustments:

[The foreshadowing of Chen Min’s early planning is highlighted] [The logic of Liu Ziyun’s fight in the tavern is enhanced] [The logic of being harassed by gangsters is adjusted] [The Sheriff’s fine plot dialogue fine-tuning]