Let’s talk about the overall situation first. We can indeed see the contribution of the new editor. However, starting from Chapter 5, it is obvious that Takeru’s old problem is again committed. The branch plot is seriously watered down, which greatly affects the rhythm and look and feel. Of course, the flaws are not outweighed.
Secondly, Fan Ye's social character is much more mature than the boys and girls, and he is more capable and comfortable to watch. This wave of the French Society has also begun to let loose all kinds of dead people and murders. This is a matter of opinion.
But here’s the problem. In order to highlight Mr. Fan’s connections, it’s a bit too much. Everyone knows and has connections with everyone, but it weakens Mr. Fan’s handling skills as a social person. My personal idea is that you can know, or nod, But there is no friendship, and the other party is tied to the chariot through interest binding, exchange, negotiation and other means, instead of saying it is a network as it is now, in fact, they are all tool men.
Especially the senior sister, who seems so popular and easy to use. In fact, cutting her and her line will not have any impact on the main line. The force selection in Chapter 5 is just a gimmick, not a "Dream Simulation Battle" The kind with different values and big changes in the plot. Of course, this requires too much from the legal society, so I just complained about it.
Finally, he complains about the fraud after "Training", and the purpose of the short story connecting the past and the next is to raise expectations and introduce the three sequel characters. Ling is the heroine's side, the sword girl leads to Fan Ye, and Li Ye leads to the senior sister.
But Ling, the sword girl and the senior sister that everyone is paying attention to are not given much role. Ling is uncontrollable, the sword girl is marginalized and persecuted in various ways. I have already mentioned the problem of the senior sister, because she is very popular and she was forced into it to increase her presence. , in fact, it would not feel inconsistent to replace her with a sword girl or other characters.
This is the part that I am most dissatisfied with, but the rest is fine. I will write a short essay related to spoilers after I straighten out the various branch plots and multi-week choices.
There is one more thing I forgot to mention. Rail Li has committed the old problem of Rail Creation. It has excessive combat power, which is in sharp contrast to the lack of combat power of Zero Rail. It is similar to the protagonist's group invasion of Babylon. I feel that there is no need to bring a bunch of rookies. , the big guys can form a group and wipe it out.
One more sentence: There was a poem saying that "all things originate from Hamel, and the outstanding people and spirits of the Nail Palace Sect". Hamel should be able to rest in peace, but the Nail Palace Sect is expected to continue until the end of the trajectory, and its ghost will never leave. So——Cassius was severely condemned for his ineffective suppression of the bandits. No wonder he didn’t send S-class later! So it seems that Cartonius, Carnanius, and Carbeius are all the same.
