I flipped through the latest chapter and found it deeply baffling.
First.
The main character's public character has always been a genius.
Geniuses have their own ways of playing. An ordinary scholar who spends three days fishing and two days drying nets is a fool. A genius who does this is called an anecdote.
Let’s give a real-life example.
When I was in high school, the boss of the experimental class finished the final exam and calculated the shooting trajectory of a game on the scratch paper. Later, he was over 700 in the college entrance examination and won the provincial science champion.
For ordinary students to play like this, it would be silly to just step on the horse. When they play it, the teacher will talk about it with great enthusiasm.
This is a true story, I'm not making it up.
If I lie, there will be thunder and lightning!
Back to the book.
When the protagonist is a warrior, he has a casual attitude towards understanding the talisman. When he arrives at Xuan Palace, he starts to sit there all day long and suddenly disappears from everyone from a genius?
This is inconsistent with the character of this book.
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second.
It’s a matter of time to comprehend the Mysterious Seal of Ten Thousand Woods.
Just compare it to the warrior period.
When I first realized a "talisman", I spent three days fishing and two days drying nets. I realized it in just a few days.
In the Xuanshi period, it took more than a month to understand, and with the help of Xuan Ti, I understood something from the second-level Xuan Yin inheritance stone sculpture.
As long as Xuandu understands the protagonist's information, he will feel that this is very reasonable.
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third.
The question of water or not.
Every plot I write is either to enrich the world view or to set up characters.
Take comprehending the mysterious seal as an example.
If the protagonist doesn't eat, drink, or travel, how can he set up a genius?
The protagonist is having such a good time, how come others don’t have any ideas?
When the twist comes, everything the protagonist does becomes an anecdote, which only leaves a lasting impression on people.
If you don't leave a legend in Xuan Palace, what kind of genius is this?
When the Master of Xuan Palace hears about these things, he will remember the protagonist's name deeply. How can he become famous quickly without doing anything extraordinary?
Anyway.
I am writing every chapter of this book carefully.
If you don't like the book, you can skip it if you read the title. If you really don't like it, forget it. I can only say sorry.
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above.
Just a personal explanation.
Everyone has their own judgment and can accept it if they are willing to accept it.
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