◇This revision will be released on February 18th. Readers who started reading the book after that time are kindly asked to ignore it.
◇For those who have started reading before, Feiyu still recommends that you re-read the beginning (it is not long, mainly chapters 3-9). I believe it will give you a better reading experience!
◇The modification is not big and has nothing to do with the main line.
◇This revision aims to make the plot better connected and more rounded, improve the previous "stiffness + lag" and other problems, and enhance the charm of the male and female protagonists.
●Supplementary instructions:
Since it is a new work by a newcomer, the writing technique is relatively green, so it is inevitable that there will be some flaws.
Many readers even reported that in the early stage, they often felt like "reading lag", "sharp perspective switching", and "messy background insertion".
In order to give you a better reading experience, I spent two days imagining it, and spent the whole day on Saturday (February 18) soaking in my book, and finally revised and perfected the early plot.
Reader feedback so far is pretty good.
The revised content is concentrated in [Chapter 3] to [Chapter 9].
