About the plot:
The two obvious lines in the first volume intertwined starting from "Struggle for Hegemony", then collided little by little, and finally exploded.
Of course, there is no need to say more about the growth of Xu Xiaoshou in the open line. Let’s mainly talk about the hidden line: the development of the world plot.
If Xu Xiaoshou is taken away, the development of this world will be that while the "Struggle for Hegemony" is underway, Sang Lao suddenly returns to the palace, prepares with the giants of the Ling Palace, lays a large net and waits for the invasion of the "Saint Slaves".
The "Saint Slave" came, and unexpectedly the visitor was the leader of the "Saint Slave". He couldn't take it with just the power of the Spiritual Palace, so he had no choice but to let it go.
With the lessons learned from the past, he took advantage of the turmoil in the White Cave to seize the information in advance that the "Holy Slave" might come to take away the Heiluo Scabbard. Ye Xiaotian sent a letter to the Holy Temple, but the Holy Temple was careless.
Only one river goose came, and even the masked man couldn't take it down. What's more, this time the "Holy Slave" was also prepared and brought Cenchofu.
After missing again, the famous sword was taken away and his dignity was ruined. The only thing the Spirit Palace could keep was a black scabbard.
Yes, without Xu Xiaoshou showing up, even the scabbard would have been taken away by Lorelei.
This is an indisputable fact, which is the most primitive attitude that the first volume wants to express. In the face of absolute strength, all struggles are futile and powerless.
And Mr. Sang, with his status and behavior as an outsider, became the only chess master in Volume One.
The formation of the structure from bottom to top is actually Sang Lao's "cage theory".
Tiansang Ling Palace is like a cage. Whether it is Ye Xiaotian, Xiao Qixiu, or Qiao Qianzhi who are trapped, they are all weak when facing the real power.
This dark color is not only implicitly reflected in such a large environment, but also in small descriptions.
Such as Lan Xinzi's unwillingness to be servile, everyone's confusion about Sang Lao's wanton character, and even Xu Xiaoshou's helpless apprenticeship.
After all, at this time, even with a golden finger, Xu Xiaoshou can only be a chess piece, and at best he can only jump around.
It is indeed very powerless!
The overall style of the first volume is not refreshing, and it actually makes people feel powerless when reading it. Even if Xu Xiaoshou frequently makes clever tricks and is strong enough to carry the weight, this gloominess still exists.
It can be said that if it were not for the out-of-character description of the protagonist, the entire volume 1 would be a greater tragedy.
Some people say why Xu Xiaoshou is so crazy, can't he write in a normal way?
Ahem, I dare to write, but do you dare to read?
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Regarding trolls:
The plot ideas were never left behind, and to be honest, I really enjoyed watching them while writing the book.
When Feng Kong and Shao Yi were killed, they started to complain loudly, saying that no one could see or hear such a big movement.
Think about it, Xu Xiaoshou swallowed ashes in Ehu and illuminated the fire. The man in black rushed over immediately, but it was Mr. Sang who stopped him.
I have been reminded of this in the previous plot, how could I not have discovered it?
This is playing chess!
You should have realized something was wrong long ago!
There is also the innate characteristic "Sharp Light" for the passive skill "Sharpness", which is restrained by the power of Mo Mo's seal, which is another big blow.
Bro, have you only masturbated to lol?
Some passive skills can also be sealed. According to the setting of this book, passive skills also have levels, acquired and innate, it’s obvious!
No matter how strong the passive is, if you take an acquired level one and fight it against an innate spiritual skill, even if you can barely resist it, what about the master spiritual skill? What about the throne level?
What's more, these are not the point at all. A person who can restrain the protagonist Goldfinger even a little bit can't even do it with Sang Lao and the masked man. He also specially emphasized the small copper stove, the small copper stove...
This is foreshadowing!
We should have discovered our blind spots long ago!
To be honest, I was really angry at the time and almost had to explain myself, but I held back because after all, this would be irresponsible to subsequent readers.
If you complain about other things, it's fine. If you complain about plot foreshadowing, there's really no way to explain it!
Of course, saying so much does not mean that everyone should stop talking. You should still complain when you should, but pay attention to your tone; you can say anything poisonous, but you should also pay attention to your tone.
Delete and ban a dragon. After all, among my options, there is only one permanent ban!
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Regarding passive skills:
Compared with the idea of a plot that has lasted for a long time, to be honest, the concept of passive skills is really just a flash of inspiration before publishing the book.
Its only function is to make the plot fun and interesting, well, that's all.
However, as for the development of various passive skills that I have conceived, the first volume is currently only at a superficial stage.
Basics, extensions, mastery, special passive skills... there will not only be these few categories, there will be more interesting ones later.
Not only the width is expanded, but the depth is also expanded. For every passive skill, you can basically develop something very powerful in the future.
Regarding this, Awakening Pool said that he couldn’t wait any longer.
Xu Xiaoshou has the ability to make money, but there are really few people in the Spiritual Palace. The general environment prevents him from getting a lot of passive points, so he can only put it on hold temporarily.
hateful.
But in the next volume, Xiao Shou will leave the palace. Thinking about it, it’s worth looking forward to!
……Um? Leaving the palace? Out of respect?
Bah, come out of the spiritual palace!
look forward?
There are a lot of holes left unfilled. Remember to remind me if you forget. Thank you. Although it is unlikely that I will forget.
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About the results:
This book was released on May 22nd, so it has been two months now.
The average order on the first day was more than 500, and now the order is almost 2,000. I hope it will be available soon!
Woohoo, it's rising so slowly. Even though there are so many collections, the daily rise is not bad. Someone must be running around to take a look on their own.
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