The first volume ended, I didn't expect it, so suddenly, and it didn't end with the protagonist pretending to be his best.
This is a matter of personal style. I think it is necessary to suppress the desire to advance first. The real pleasure is to take down the strongest group of people. What kind of satisfaction can you get by taking down Ronaldinho? So I have to spend a certain amount of space on it. Let’s first describe other strong people.
The end of the first volume was designed at this time. No matter how the author describes Pei Hansheng at this time and how he is a genius, it would be better to show the results of the seven subjects and let the readers think about it for themselves.
Okay, let me first talk about a few plot points in the first volume that people have asked about a lot. (Just a brief explanation, no further details or spoilers)
First, parents.
do you died? He must be dead; will he be resurrected? No; is he a boss? no.
Because the author doesn't want to make a fuss about his parents, he can respond to everyone accurately.
The reason why I wrote about missing is because the protagonist did not see the body. If he did not see it, he would naturally be missing.
Second, copy.
The dungeon will not always be in this mode. Careful readers will have discovered that the vortex at the entrance to the dungeon is colored. Friends who often play games should know that the colors are generally manifestations of different levels. Gold is the legend, and white is It has always been ordinary.
I put a well-conceived small world in a white copy, and the protagonist is rewarded with 100 gold coins and a bottle of potion after painstaking efforts to crack the world view. It is inappropriate, right?
Third, talent.
The ability is written as magic fog and rain, so naturally there is magic, fog and rain.
Fourth, career.
I saw a reader comment saying that I wanted to set up a second career for the protagonist, but I didn’t know how to hide it, so that everyone could have a second career.
In fact, that is not a trick for the protagonist.
Strength obtained by cheating is not as strong as hard work. The protagonist has talents and already has an advantage over other practitioners. He is not prepared to cheat the protagonist so much.
Fifth, the point of harvesting crops at the beginning.
I wrote about women going out to harvest, and I felt resentful. Then many people criticized me and said that I didn’t know that when doing farm work in the countryside, the whole family works together, emmmmm...
Think about it, everyone, a man went out to fight with his son and nephew, injured himself, and failed to win. Then when he went to work, only women were allowed to do it. Isn’t it normal for women to have grievances? No mother-in-law can complain. A few words, right? Everyone, you curse and curse but you do everything you need to do. Isn’t this normal in life?
There are still a few points that I can't explain, and the explanation would be spoilers, such as Cang Gou, such as 4119, such as
In addition to these points, some readers said it was too watery.
Please explain, no irrigation, the explanation is over.
Yes, the explanation is so short, because readers who know that the author is foreshadowing and reasonably introducing other supporting characters will not say that I am stupid and do not need to explain in detail. Those who say that the author is stupid also do not believe in the explanation, so there is no need to waste more words.
After finishing the plot, let’s talk about it in the comment area.
There are many good reviews in the comment area. Thank you for posting to praise the book or the author. I have read every one of them carefully. Such comments can make me smile and give me more motivation to write.
Of course, there are a lot of negative reviews, and because negative reviews are inherently more controversial, they are always at the front of the comments section, but as long as they don’t use swear words, I don’t delete them.
If you have anything you want to complain about, share, or analyze, you can say it in the comment area. I actually know how to read it. If you ask a lot, I will explain it in the summary at the end of the paper. Just be careful not to curse, and don’t leave any negative comments with those mindless ones. As a general rule, there is no need to lower our standards for nothing, right?
I won’t go into detail about other negative reviews, which can easily bring negative energy to everyone. The author can just bear it himself and share something interesting with everyone.
One person said that the good reviews were all from spammers, and that the monthly tickets were one dollar for each one. Haha, I laughed for several minutes. It was so cute what this guy said.
In addition, I was very touched to see my friends who are pursuing my studies care about my updates and my perfect attendance. Perfect attendance is 1,500 yuan, which is a lot. If you can get it, I will definitely want to take it. Don’t ask for leave unless necessary. , I even want to update 20,000 words every day, but time is really limited and entangled with trivial matters. Many times it is too difficult to spare some time to concentrate on coding.
Also, everyone who helped the author correct typos in the chapter description, thank you very much for your hard work.
There are definitely imperfections in the previous plot, so thank you for your tolerance.
After finishing the review, let’s talk about the author’s happiest moment every day.
The happiest thing is opening the Writer's Assistant and seeing friends voting for this book; the happiest thing is that readers urged me to update it just ten minutes after the update; the happiest thing is seeing the readers who helped maintain it in the comments below, thank you. you.
In addition, I have a small wish. The monthly ticket is now close to 1,900, which is only a little short of 2,000. Let’s reach 2,000 before the end of the month. I don’t know if it is appropriate or not. Don’t want too much. Too much is a waste. I just want to get it together. Look better...
Tonight's plot is the second volume, volume name: Hidden Warbler in Green Leaves.
Although the green leaves hide the warbler, its song cannot be concealed.
Here are the tips and acknowledgments:
Thanks to my dad for the reward. Although he kept telling me not to write, he secretly supported me with the reward.
Thanks to "Literary Maniac" for the many tips.
Thanks to "Book Friends 20230508190518284" for the 1500 point reward.
Thanks to "Green Boat" for the 500-point reward.
Thanks to "Jiang Xiaowang", "You Among the Stars", "Xia Qing", "Big Rich Li Xiaoer", and "Book Friends 20221104075130742" for their rewards.
Thank you, and thank you to everyone who voted for this book.
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