Volume 4 (Part 1) Remarks on the end of the volume + thanks for the reward
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In a hurry, I cut the fourth volume into two parts, mainly to create a new format for the title.
Regarding Volume 4 (Part 1), I am personally very dissatisfied and am planning to revise it. At least all the typos and sentences should be polished up. I've been reading it over and over again for a while now, but I don't have any good ideas.
Today, I divided the volume into two. I reviewed the outline of Volume 4 that I set up in early July. Only less than half of the outline has been written so far. The most important part of Meng Chen's quest to recruit ghosts is actually so delayed.
The original setting was that the main plot of the fourth volume was Meng Chen recruiting ghosts and Bai Yan's crisis. Solve the crisis and collect all six of Bai Yan's disciples, and that's it.
But now, there is only one sign of Bai Xuan's crisis.
The priorities are reversed, and the fifth volume of the golden elixir chapter has been delayed in opening.
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Some readers should have guessed it, right?
One volume corresponds to a realm, and the fourth volume corresponds to the mysterious fetus. The fifth is involved in the golden elixir.
The original three-paragraph outline actually tells the story in three stages.
One is to build the foundation of Luogui Island and destroy the Six Desire Pearl.
One is Tianyang discussing the Tao, forming elixirs for practice, and then the Dragon Slaying chapter begins.
Then there are the plots of the Immortal Tribulation chapter, the Ancient City of Wilderness, the Three Catastrophes, and some overseas plots added. Let’s talk about the current situation of Taixuanzong, Fengxian’s hometown when he traveled eastward, etc.
There is a gap of hundreds of years between the three plots. Therefore, I specially added a fourth volume, hoping to provide a transition. Unexpectedly, it delayed the main plot outline. It has been difficult to start the path of spiritual cultivation in Jinfang waters.
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Now, trying to overturn the overhaul and make readers run back and read it again is definitely not good and disrespectful to readers.
The next volume can only be made as compact as possible and well connected with the fifth volume.
Four (top) may add some detailed descriptions, similar to small interactive depictions of characters. After all, the appearance of some characters in the fourth volume was too hasty and simple and needs to be polished up. The general plot is difficult to change, so those who are too lazy to review it don’t need to read it.
Re-enrollment and the like will be considered as appropriate. If I write it, I will let you know which chapter it is. After all, everyone has discovered the current supplementary registration. I have highlighted some content that echoes the main text but will never be included in the main text (refer to the North Sea Dragon)
This is the purpose of supplementary enrollment.
I set this article to only finish the story of Tianyi Li. Golden elixir, calamity immortal, dragon slaying, restoration of continent...
The following dynasties and the like will not appear in the text at all. After finishing the main text, I will add a few extra chapters. But how much can be written in those small chapters? That's why we use supplementary recording to tell the future experiences and achievements of some people who will no longer appear in the main text.
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