The first volume is completed, with sixty-four chapters, which means "King Wen's sixty-four hexagrams". Therefore, the last chapter has a bit too many words.
Personally, I still didn’t write the feeling I should have. I originally wanted to try a multi-line perspective and start from the three lines of Henghua, Liuhui and Laoyezi at the same time.
It seems that the plots of Fu Danwei and Fu Henghua are not connected. In fact, Fu Henghua's actions involved part of the Tianmo Palace's energy. And it was precisely because Fu Danwei was sitting on Panlong Island and the five altar masters of the Demon Palace did not pursue Henghua and his party that the Seven Difficulties were much weaker.
As Song Chunqiu said, both sides of the Demon Palace wanted to succeed, but in the end they failed.
Of course, Song Chunqiu and Ji Mingfeng contributed a lot. After all, they held back the Lord of the Demon Palace and sent Henghua and his party to Erlong Stream. Only then did we have a more satisfactory result in the end.
Regarding these two characters, we will slowly mention them in the next few volumes. Both of them are involved with some hidden figure.
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As for "Seven emotions refine the true nature, human tribulations replace heavenly tribulations", it is one of the two routes in the original setting.
Should he choose to survive the Heavenly Tribulation at Buried Turtle Reef, or directly use the Seven Emotions Tribulation? I thought about it for several days and chose the second option.
But the writing power is not enough, the description of the Seven Difficulties is too sparse, and the three lines are mixed together. Everyone said that the plot was too delayed, so they simply gathered together earlier and unified the multiple lines as soon as possible.
Regarding the plot of the Northern Territory, Henghua fights water ghosts. I should have taken the opportunity to understand a certain secret method that was very suitable for "Zaihuahui Yuan Gong". But after thinking about it, I moved the relevant plot and settings to the next volume. The Metallurgist Taoist and the Spiritual Painter are already tedious enough, let’s leave the Ghost Dao lineage behind.
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According to the original plot setting, Fu Liuhui rescued the panda mother and son midway, which wasted time. When she arrived at Dilie Island, she caught up with Ji Mingfeng and the master of the Yuanhuo Altar to fight, and then triggered the Dragon King's wrath. Next she met Song Chunqiu and got his advice to guard the burial turtle reef. In this way, Song Chunqiu's appearance will not be too sudden.
However, the main text deletes the plot of Fu Liuhui and only retains the outcome of this plot. It is mentioned in a few simple sentences, which is a bit stiff.
The content of the original seventy-two chapters was compressed into sixty-four chapters. Although more words have been crammed into the last few chapters. But according to a rough calculation, fifteen thousand words should have been deleted, right?
Therefore, Fu Liuhui, a female character who was originally intended to be well described in the first volume, was deemed a failure.
This also indirectly leads to the exception of Xiaoyu, which is relatively transparent and has no luminous point of its own, and Jinxian'e, which is relatively flat. The first volume highlights the description of male characters.
The Yang is strong and the Yin is weak.
As for Fu Tongjun, although she was mentioned several times, it was just a hint after all, because she is the main character in the second volume.
In the conception, this book is about Henghua as the absolute protagonist, telling the story of the changes of a cultivating family. In each volume, several Fu family members will appear.
So I put a lot of effort into getting 12+1 brothers and sisters for Henghua. The first volume specifically devotes several paragraphs to describing those people.
Take Fu Maiyuan, for example, who managed to get Fu Henghua to use Fu Maiyuan's name. This is so that when Fu Maiyuan appears on the scene in the future, everyone can react immediately. Ah, this person is Fu Henghua's fifth brother.
There are also six talents inherited from Fu Jiabai Huangtang. In the future, these people will appear with different talents and show different understandings and methods of use.
Fu Xiangfeng's understanding of Feng Yu and Feng Yin was simply weak in the first volume!
But this is meant to slowly build up over the next few volumes.
There are no weak abilities, only stupid users. This is something that the first volume has been hinting at.
Henghua can solve a series of troubles even if he uses "Purchase Technique", which is in sharp contrast to Fu Xiangfeng.
The higher the skills and spells are, the better. The right one is the best.
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Next up is the second volume. If the first volume is just to let everyone see the Fu family and see one page of the world of cultivation. I spent a lot of time talking about the setting.
Then the second volume is the real plot confrontation, and there will be much less explanation about the settings.
So, this kind of slow-burn plot, which takes a whole volume to set up, will definitely make readers complain!
This volume actually describes a lot of hidden things.
For example, in Erlong Stream, Fu Xuanxing controlled Lihuo, the nameless sword technique, and Song Chunqiu's inexplicable attitude towards the Fu family, etc.
If nothing else, the second volume will explain it. Let’s see how the second volume ends up broken. Personally, I hope the plot ends on Fire Gate Island. However, due to space reasons, it is also possible to directly stop the battle between the Fu family and the Wei family. Anyway, it depends on the situation.
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