0054 and 0055 have been modified

After carefully reading everyone's opinions, although more people chose not to modify it in the end, I took a closer look at the details and found that it was indeed not handled well enough.

In particular, the position that was supposed to be an emotional flash point was solved directly in a "non-protagonist" way, which weakened the meaning of the previous judgment and efforts. Although it was pulled up and played again later, it seemed too delayed, so Finally, I thought about it and changed it.

If it says (modified), it is modified. If it doesn't (modified), you can download it again. It is guaranteed to be much better than the original version.

And...in short, it's all...it's all the fish's fault,

After Yufa's book was overhauled twice, I didn't go over the details again. I made a very stupid mistake that I shouldn't have made. I'm sorry.

And because it will be on the shelves on the 1st, I have been in a hurry to save the manuscript these two days. I was so happy to correct the code before posting it, so I didn’t read it more than once before posting it. In the end, I didn’t find anything wrong with these two chapters, so I missed this mistake. Go ahead and apologize again.

Cover your face, you really can't rush at any time.

Let Yu cry here. I have finished writing more than 10,000 words today. Yu’s manuscript has been deleted, edited, changed and moved. It can be regarded as completely reset to zero... Or2

Finally... this time the fish has completely recognized it (lying down). It seems that the fish can't get up quickly. When it is anxious, the water will rise, and the quality will also decrease. When the brain is not clear like today, it will cause big problems. Mistakes.

So it’s not really that the fish doesn’t want to write more… the main reason is that it really can’t be written quickly. When it feels like it has the energy to spare, the fish will try to write as much as possible, but sometimes it’s really beyond its capabilities.

Looking at the big guys in the author group who can make tens of thousands of dollars at a time, Yu is really envious and drools with envy, but quality, speed and rigor seem to be an impossible triangle here.

Starting from the second chapter of the previous book, every time the fish wants to occupy all three, one of them will completely collapse, causing the whole to start to decline... Or2.

As I write this, I suddenly realize that I seem to have been verbose a lot out of habit... Well... I just put the most important thing at the end. I wish everyone a happy Mid-Autumn Festival! ! ! !