0. Most of the leave requests have been deleted, making the reading experience more comfortable. (I have screenshots of the leave application note, and there are many comments. I may make a video in the future to express my gratitude for this special and unforgettable writing journey.)
1. Corrected all typos from 158-218 (as long as they were pointed out by you)
2. A new character is added in section 190: the back elephant. The second mate of the Kuli Pirates.
3. In section 191, some readers pointed out that the protagonist’s language was inappropriate.
The original text is——
The dragon boy smiled and said: "We are human race and the people of the empire, and dealing with the murlocs is the way to do justice! Of course, there is another important reason. The high price offered by Lord Dutong really impressed us."
In fact, it was intentional.
This is the apparent "slip of the tongue" but the actual "voice" of the dragon boy.
4. Some book friends pointed out that the first volume of "Beast Rider" is missing section 6. After checking, the reason was found: the first volume has been revised, based on readers' opinions, and after self-thinking, some descriptions in the opening sections have been cut. , so that it is no longer bloated and cumbersome, and the reduction is approximately equal to one section. I forgot to change the title, it looks like a section is missing. Now change "Section 5" to "Section 5-6".
5. In section 209, the two passwords of Huantong were modified and two more meaningful numbers were used, which are the group numbers of the genuine book club group of "Infinite Blood Core" and the Deacon Penguin group.
In Chapter 6.214, there was an error in the salary for Huantong’s recruitment of Zong Ge. There was an extra word “ten thousand”, which has been corrected.
7. Some book friends responded: Alchemy devices are used a lot in melee, and it feels uncomfortable to read. I'm thinking of adding some description somewhere in the previous article to make it less obtrusive. If there are any official changes in the future, further instructions will be given.
8. Today the protagonist group officially leaves the island, and the plot about the Double Eye Island officially comes to an end. Here are some of my own feelings: I spent a lot of thought on the melee on Eye Island, which involved many characters, including pirates, mercenaries, merchants, lords, murlocs, silver-level lone rangers, etc.
Each of them has their own ideas, unique abilities, styles of doing things, and their limitations.
In this melee, everyone has their own unique performance, and it is these performances that make them collide with each other and influence each other.
Some people draw water from bamboo baskets but come to nothing, some people quietly make a fortune, some people go from heaven to hell, and some people fall into danger but survive.
Until the end, the outcome of each character cannot be predicted.
Even the protagonist team is like this, unable to help themselves and falling into a whirlpool.
This is exactly the literary effect I want to achieve - from this melee, I can reflect the weirdness of fate, the cruel life after the collision of reality and dreams, and the weakness and helplessness of a single person in the social game.
Even if the protagonist group has many trump cards, they are still walking on the edge of the cliff, almost ready for defeat.
Such an encounter also hints at the positioning of the protagonist group.
To the whole world, they are still minor players. If there is a little bit of trouble in the journey of destiny, they will be in danger of being overturned.
At the same time, it also describes the main theme of the entire era from the side - the invasion of the Orc continent by the Shengming Empire.
Under this theme, the Eye Island that Hutong worked so hard to manage was forced to turn into a transportation island. The fishmen's determination to take back their homeland is worthy of recognition, but in fact, even if they can take it, they can't hold it.
Failure is inevitable.
Under the tide of the times, both Hutong and the fish-men tribe are so weak.
It can also be seen that the current protagonist group cannot be on the stage of the times and does not have the qualifications. A little storm can put them in danger.
Next, how did this group of people step onto the stage of the times?
How many storms will sweep them away, separate them, torture them, turn them against each other, make them enlightened, and make them shine?
Thinking about it, it seems a bit exciting.
