Important notice: The first volume has been overhauled and several new chapters have been added!

Sections 141/143, 153, 154, 159, 160, 163, 171, 173, 174, 176, 183, 185, 187, 190-210 are revised. Corrected typos and deleted many unnecessary descriptions to make the text more concise.

The most important point——

1. Added 185+ new sections, describing in detail Zidi’s practice of necromancy.

2. Completely revised the end of the first volume, adding new sections 211 and 212. It focuses on describing the exploration team's solution to Zhusha, the Flame Dragon King, Zidi's transformation into a ghost girl, and how to discover the deep-sea monster fish number.

Alas.

The overhaul was finally completed, and I was temporarily relieved.

It took much more time and energy than I imagined. However, there are many rewards.

After all, one of the most reliable ways to improve an author's writing skills is to revise his own articles.

To be honest, since the beginning of the book, traditional writing methods, Internet writing habits, film screenwriters' creative skills, etc. have all been fighting in my mind.

For example, I struggled for a long time whether to describe the ending of the first volume in detail.

On the one hand, it ends abruptly at the climax, which is deeply artistically beautiful in this genre. But on the other hand, this can also make it difficult for readers to read. I have been hesitating about the modifications here for many days. Finally, taking into account the reading habits of online articles, I decided to describe it in detail.

Looking back, the difficulty in revising the article is not only struggling with self-denial and doubt, but more importantly, the lack of a standard. The standards of web writing tend to be more commercial. One of the standards for an excellent tradition lies in the output of values. Movie and other screenwriters have their own mature and rigorous structural arrangements.

Because there is no specific reference, I am still in the exploratory stage.

Please look back and make some suggestions.

This standard can only be revealed through self-improvement and proven in practice.