"Can I?" Meng Li hesitated, "They all know that you and I are together, and they might even make it worse for me!"
"One of the things in the training camp is that teachers have the obligation to help students make corrections. Don't ask if you can? Instead, take a liking to the teacher and attack directly." After a pause, Lin Su continued: "You have to judge whether it is correct or not. If it's worse, you need to keep the manuscript and draft."
After sending Meng Li away, Lin Su murmured: "I am also curious whether it is because of your son's request or because of my own responsibility."
Meng Li was undoubtedly the last weapon to test.
In fact, in the evaluation of outstanding students, short stories account for almost 30%, and participation in activities is the highlight.
However, wouldn't it be interesting to defeat Wen Hongjie in his most proud short story?
It’s time to get back to where we were before.
…
The third day is the last day of winter camp.
In the morning it was still normal activities.
Wen Hongjie and the others seemed to have completely isolated Lin Su and Meng Li, but he was still the star in the spotlight.
Lin Su and Meng Li had already discussed where to go after the winter camp.
"Susu, let's go sing K! Your songs are really nice!!"
"good."
Meng Li's manuscript has been revised and has become quite perfect.
Manuscripts are submitted privately and then scored by ten teachers, with the highest score removed and the average score after the lowest score taken.
Submit before 12 noon.
As soon as Lin Su submitted his manuscript, he attracted the attention of Professor Luan and Professor Du.
Teacher Zhang, who manages files, saw Professor Luan and Professor Du appearing so neatly in the file room for the first time.
Still a little surprised.
"Is the manuscript she handed in short?"
Teacher Zhang thought about the short story that Lin Su submitted. It was only a little over a thousand words long, which was much less than the others.
"short."
Professor Luan and Professor Du looked at each other with joy in their eyes. It seemed that Lin Su understood what they meant. There was no limit on the subject matter, it must be the ancient poems they had written! !
I couldn't wait to make a few copies and circulate them.
Professor Luan and Professor Du looked at each other the moment they saw the question.
"Is this...reasoning?"
But don’t you want to be short?
Well, after looking at the length, compared to short stories, it’s a bit short.
A little uninterested.
He wanted to put it aside, but everyone else looked at it, so Professor Luan picked it up anyway.
Teacher Zhang looked at the behavior of these teachers and couldn't help but pick it up and read it.
[One beautiful evening, a young civil servant in a good mood was sitting in the second row of seats in the theater, watching the performance with a telescope. He watched the performance and felt extremely happy. But suddenly, his face wrinkled, his eyes rolled up, and his breathing stopped...]
Are these terms too common?
It wouldn't be so with a little modification, right?
Is there anything outstanding about this article?
Today's junior high school students shouldn't have such a lack of language, right?
Breathing has stopped. Is this a heart attack?
cause of death?
A little outrageous, right?
Teacher Zhang frowned and continued reading.
Uh, okay.
Just a sneeze.
Sure enough, the process of sneezing described in simple and materialistic language is the most vivid.
Does sneezing have anything to do with this article?
Teacher Zhang continued to read.
But here's the twist in the story.
A little old man in front of him was wiping his bald head vigorously with a glove.
He muttered.
Obviously, the sneeze hit the little old man.
The young civil servant began to panic.
The little old man Na Ge is a manager in the administrative department who is about to retire with a high official position.
Will a small civil servant be killed by him?
Teacher Zhang inevitably brings into this "suspense" story.
The junior civil servant apologized.
Managers forgive.
Keep apologizing.
Keep forgiving.
Is it because it is inconvenient to have an attack in public?
But with so many apologies and forgiveness, it doesn’t feel like an act.
The young civil servant still didn't let go. His various psychological activities exaggerated his inner fear.
Seeing this, Teacher Zhang thought the little civil servant was a bit ridiculous.
However, an idea suddenly came to mind.
The last time the character creation was so successful, it was...
A long time ago.
And now, he seems to have seen the vivid image of a young civil servant who is worried about the future! !
Keep reading.
The young civil servant came home and complained to his wife about this matter, "That's right!" I apologized just now, but he was a little weird, and he didn't say a single word that sounded good... and there was no time to talk in detail. 】
Have you really thought that people have forgiven you?
The next day, the young civil servant put on formal clothes and went to apologize.
Teacher Zhang only felt that it was a bit outrageous.
Isn't this too courageous?
Amidst the successive apologies and the manager’s impatient forgiveness, Teacher Zhang actually felt a little sorry for the manager.
Could this be intentional by a small civil servant?
A tactic used to entangle managers.
In the end, the manager was so annoyed that he killed the junior civil servant?
This reasoning is quite appropriate.
Finally, when the little civil servant pestered the manager again.
The manager yelled impatiently, "Get out."
When the young civil servant heard this, his whole body was numb with fear.
[The young civil servant suddenly felt something broken in his stomach. Seeing nothing and hearing nothing, he retreated step by step to the door. He came to the street and walked with difficulty... He returned home in a daze, without taking off his uniform, and fell on the couch... and died. 】
Absurd and weird ending.
The little civil servant died because of his own fear.
In just over a thousand words, I actually wrote several apologies and reversals.
The death of a young civil servant seems absurd, but it is extremely reasonable.
After reading it, Teacher Zhang was ready to put it down.
I heard Professor Luan say next to me, "Irony, the ultimate irony!"
When Teacher Zhang heard these words, the hand holding the copy paper froze in his hand. Suddenly, he was shocked, as if he was shocked by an electric shock, and his eyes widened!
"Wait...this story..."
Teacher Zhang read it again.
Unlike Professor Luan and Professor Du who have been obsessed with literature for several years, he can see through the essence of this at a glance.
He decided to watch it again.
Read it for the second time.
Teacher Zhang’s expression was complicated.
No wonder Professor Du and Professor Luan were able to make peace because of her.
This description method is really brilliant!
The most simple and plain language describes the most poignant and ironic story.
A bitter reality.
What was the cause of the death of the young civil servant?
It was the administrator's always stiff and arrogant attitude when facing the small civil servant's apology;
It is the timid and timid character of a junior civil servant;
More importantly, the strict hierarchy and unequal social relations led to his death!
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