This volume is over.
All I can say is that the writing in this volume is a mess. I didn’t write what I wanted to write. Sometimes I don’t even know what I’m writing. It wasn't until the Ji Mansion was destroyed that some conditions were restored.
In addition, at the end, it was said that the heroine should raise the child. I've hinted so much before that Leng Siyuan and his wife don't have children! Leng Siyuan and his wife have no children! Leng Siyuan and his wife have no children! ! ! ! ! As a result, there were still people who thought they would be raised by a female host, and after a little thought, they knew it was for them.
Anyway, that's it, read it or not, this volume was originally written very rubbish.
Just by looking at the title of the volume, you can tell that according to the original outline, this volume was supposed to focus on describing Leng Xinnan, while the protagonist and the Sword Immortal had an intersection, and then the plot centered on the destruction of the Ji Mansion.
It's a pity that Ye Yaoyao, who was supposed to be the protagonist of this volume, became a passerby.
There are many reasons for this. I am becoming more and more constrained. Whether it is driving or plotting, I am always afraid of being reported. I don’t dare to fool around with some of the darker plots.
Another reason is that I adjusted the outline without authorization at the end of the previous volume. As a result, I failed to keep up with the subsequent ideas and wrote in a hurry. The more I wrote, the more chaotic it became.
A few days ago, Diandian asked me how many times I had adjusted the outline. I said three times, but it was actually five times. This also led to a complete disconnect between the plot and the subsequent ones, and could only be modified bit by bit. In the end, most of the outline was completely useless.
As for why I have to adjust the outline randomly, the reason is very simple. I think too much during the writing process.
On the one hand, I feel that there are flaws in the plot or the pace is too slow. I need to adjust it. This happened when I was writing "The Lady", but at that time it was just a fine-tuning, and it had no overall impact.
But this time, the adjustment was a little bigger.
I made a big mistake and failed to stick to my own ideas, so I read the book review and revised the article.
Logically speaking, this situation should not happen to an old author like me, but it does happen. It can only be said that after the old book had some achievements, it was like walking on thin ice when writing. I was afraid that this plot would not be good or that plot would be criticized. In the end, I changed it over and over again and changed it to four different things.
The tone of this book is not purely enjoyable, and it is unavoidable to look depressing at times.
Some readers hope that the protagonist can be more invincible, so I will add cheats. If there is hope that the relationship with the heroine will progress faster, then I will let Luo accept Leng as soon as possible. Some readers hope that the character of a certain heroine will be changed, then I will change it to the eldest princess. Some hope that this character will not die, some hope that this character will die soon...
In addition, in recent years, due to the epidemic and other reasons, everyone has been very depressed. Some readers hope that the overall situation can be more relaxed and that the cases should not be too heart-wrenching or tragic.
I thought about it and felt that it should be like this. It was too depressing and uncomfortable to watch. It would be better to be more relaxed. Even when I watch TV, I tend to choose more comedies.
So I tried my best to change it if I could, and adjusted the twists or plots that were originally dark and heart-wrenching. As a result, I gradually became confused by the change, and the cases I designed and the daily emotional life were also messy.
In mid-November, I had the urge to delete the entire front part and write it according to my original outline plan, but the amount of work was too large. And doing this means that the book is completely useless, and I finally managed to write it down.
The original outline of this volume is that while the protagonist is investigating the Ji Mansion, he meets Ye Yaoyao in the world of Red Rain and discovers some secrets. In the end, the investigation revealed Ji Tianhao's conspiracy in reality. After killing He Jia, Sister Leng sneaked into the Ji family and accidentally discovered the trapped Mrs. Jiang. As a result, Sister Leng was also trapped. But because of Sister Leng's special life experience (there was foreshadowing before), Mrs. Jiang finally sacrificed herself to help Leng gain the power of the gods and complete the process of mending his heart. Afterwards, Li Nanke destroyed the conspiracy, and then helped Lao Jiang and his wife rescue the child. At the same time, find out who is connected to the underworld.
Although Xuanyuan Hui no longer has Ji Xiuwan and Ji Tianhao, there are still people who have seized power and compete with the protagonist in a battle of wits and courage. Each other's undercover identities will continue to reverse. Because I wrote before, my uncle had an informant who arranged to enter the Xuanyuan Club. This role should have been outstanding.
In the original outline, Lao Jiang will not die here, because he will be needed in the later plot and will die in the case of the Empress Dowager in Beijing.
In terms of emotions, the protagonist of the outline plan officially confirmed his relationship with Leng Xinnan. At the same time, the relationship between the protagonist and the eldest princess and the empress dowager is further developed, which will facilitate the plot of the next volume. And Yu Hongye and Ye Yaoyao lived in the protagonist's house.
But because it was too confusing, I temporarily abandoned the plot of the Red Rain World in the later part of this volume and focused on the actual investigation. He also temporarily put the eldest princess aside.
How should I put it? My ability is limited.
Although he kept saying that he would write according to his own ideas, he still couldn't stick to it, and it was ultimately ruined. All I can say is that I still don’t have enough confidence in my own work.
The reason why I was able to start low and go high in the last book was because I was almost entirely focused on doing it according to my own ideas. No matter how controversial some of the plots were, I would not waver. The book starts low and goes low, and it does show that the consequences of random changes are very serious. I blame my lack of confidence.
In short, this book has been very disappointing so far, and the results will probably not be good in the future, so I deleted the scenes of the two female protagonists who have not yet appeared. As for the role of He Panjun's sister He Xinyue, only one name appears. It's easy to deal with at the moment. It can be added or not.
After reducing the outline, the number of words in this book will be much less than that of Niangzi. Try to finish the scenes of the heroine. As for other plots, Red Rain World will delete some of them so that it will not be too long. The next volume is to marry the little rabbit and then go to the capital. Let's talk about the queen. The plot in the capital is the case of Luo's life experience and the truth about the empress dowager.
The end of the capital is the plot of the underworld and the Tianqiong Sect. The original outline plan was to accept Ye Yaoyao here, and we will watch it later. Because the outline is a lot messy now, let’s adjust it again.
Anyway, that’s it for this volume. At the beginning of the month, I thought I’d just open it twice, but I was persuaded by Lao Xu, so I’d better finish it with peace of mind.
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