I made a note before, saying that some of the previous chapters were deleted, so some book friends came to ask what was deleted. Today, some book friends also asked on QQ, so I will tell you.
It’s a good time to take this opportunity to talk about other issues with the book.
In fact, there are not many deletions, mainly some paragraphs and sentences, or individual words that are more explicit or inappropriate for driving.
So it’s not something that affects the plot, so don’t worry about it.
Up to now, I have been very careful in writing, but it is inevitable that sometimes inappropriate things will appear. The editor also reminds me in time. This allows me to understand some bottom lines more clearly and avoid becoming more and more excited as I write, and finally take the next step. Following in the footsteps of this book.
To be honest, the situation in the last book has probably put me on the smart blacklist, so I can’t write too boldly. In the past, I was blocked after a while after I finished writing, but now I am blocked instantly as soon as I post it. Before, even my testimonials were blocked, which was a bit helpless, so I took it easy as long as I could.
Fortunately, the author himself is a serious person and doesn't know how to drive, so you don't have to worry too much.
Also, let’s talk about the heroine.
Because someone said before that there are too many female protagonists.
In fact, my initial idea was to introduce all the female protagonists at once, and then start to saturate the characters bit by bit, trying to write out my own character traits.
So although there are many female protagonists appearing, I only focus on the main heroine Luo. After all, my energy is limited, so I can only do it one by one. First, describe the main palace, and try to leave a deep impression on the readers first.
After Luo is almost done with his portrayal, he will then put his energy into portraying other female characters one by one. This will be done in an orderly manner to avoid any complications later on.
In addition, some readers said that if the heroine is introduced in one go, there will be no sense of expectation for the rest of the story. I think this suggestion is really good, so when I was adjusting the outline, I suppressed the two heroines first and put them at the back to create a little sense of anticipation.
Every reader has their own favorite types and some they hate. I can only try to make each heroine’s character more vivid. If I fail to do so, it can only be said that the author’s ability is limited.
In addition, there is the detective element mentioned by many old readers.
In fact, some readers don't like this. They are all LSPs and just want to read "Hurry Up".
So I try to neutralize it. Choose a simple short case, and then add the investigation to the daily life. Although the pace is slower, it will not look too complicated and impatient. At the same time, it can also ensure the fun of the investigation and the final twist. The old readers who have been following have actually seen the changes in this book, so they won’t go into details.
The outline of this book has been adjusted twice so far. Logically speaking, the author's biggest taboo is adjusting the outline, but I don't care much. First, this book was opened in a hurry, so the outline is not very complete. On the other hand, when writing, I feel that the rhythm is wrong, so I have to adjust it to ensure coherence.
The disadvantage is that it will occasionally cause stalls, so you can only adjust slowly, and then try to make up for the debt as soon as possible this month.
And one more thing.
There are readers in the group, or in the book review section, or even Qing me alone, saying that the previous chapters are incoherent and cannot be connected.
That's because anti-theft measures were implemented at that time, so the pirated version of the website was incomplete and missing the part that I made up for in the end. At that time, subscribing to the genuine version had no impact. At least I asked everyone in the group and it had no impact.
Having said that, I have to complain about one thing.
I didn't want to say it at first, but it was too much to bear.
In order to read my book, a book friend spent money to read the original version for the first time. But then he found me and asked me why the subscription prices for my chapters and other people’s chapters were different. Someone else’s chapter costs ten book coins, but mine costs a dozen or twenty.
Although! but! I explained that this thing depends on word count. But this big brother didn’t understand, and said shouldn’t everything be charged by chapter? At first I thought this guy was joking on purpose, but I didn't expect that he really didn't understand.
But seeing that I was too lazy to explain, he finally scolded me with 'sb' and deleted me as a friend.
But then this book friend gave me a reward of one yuan for no reason. I don’t know if it’s him because the name is a bit similar. I figured he might have figured it out, so he apologized. In short, if there is anything you don’t understand, go to the group and ask first, and someone will help answer it.
This reminds me of another strange thing.
When I wrote my last book, a book friend asked me for money, saying that he wanted to subscribe to my book to support its original version. By then I had earned the subscription money and had nothing to lose, and he also supported me. Damn it, you have a matryoshka doll over here.
But in the end, this guy still spent money to subscribe to some chapters, just to watch the extras I wrote.
Sure enough, lsp is the way to go.
In fact, if you think about it, many authors will encounter some readers with abnormal brain circuits. Fortunately, there are relatively few, otherwise they can provide a lot of material.
Speaking of extras, this will be announced later.
It’s hard to say too much here.
In short, write it down first. As for daily updates, an average of 8,000 words per day is not too small. After all, the quality must be maintained. If you write too fast, there will inevitably be signs of collapse. I can only try my best, plus I am getting older and I just celebrated my eighteenth birthday.
One last thing, don't talk nonsense about what kind of author I am, or slander my innocence. Douya is a serious person.
