She has been a Chinese teacher for many years and has very solid knowledge of literature and history. She also liked to write something before. Li Shi immediately thought of himself and felt that she was quite similar to him.
Because of these reserves, in his plan, he plans to write and spread the art of calligraphy in the future.
And if you want Bai Mangmang to find a hobby and get out of the depression of random thoughts, writing would be a good suggestion.
"When you say writing, do you mean writing prose and poetry, or writing?"
Bai Mangmang: "I guess I had them all in the beginning. The main thing was writing. At that time, I especially liked watching martial arts, Jin Yong's, Gu Long's, Wu Ji's, and Li Liang's. I loved watching them all. The more I watched them, the more I couldn't help but watch them. I have written a little bit.”
Bai Mangmang: "Jin Yong Gulong, you should know that you young people may have never heard of the two martial arts authors Wu Ji and Li Liang, right?"
Li Shi pursed his lips: "Classmate Xiaobai, are you very old? You actually call me 'young man'?"
After a while, Bai Mangmang said: "Well, that's not true (smirk)"
Li Shi blinked and typed: "Well, I am indeed still very young, but I am not young anymore. You can tell by looking at my name. The stubborn stone is very big! (sinister laugh)"
After sending it, I suddenly felt a "sneaky" feeling, as if I had tasted the fun of chatting with someone while hiding my identity.
Bai Mangmang: "(knock on head)(knock on head)"
When Li Shi saw the head-banging emoticon sent, she felt that she was not angry. On the contrary, she seemed quite happy.
Li Shi opened the browser, searched for the two martial arts writers, and then said: "I have never heard of these two before. I just searched and found out that I have never read their works before."
Bai Mangmang: "It's normal. You all read online now. As I told you before, in fact, sometimes I also read online books. In the past, a student stole it in class and I confiscated it. The book was called "The Earth" "Master", written by an online author named Xu Gongzi Shengzhi. After I took it back to my office, I flipped through it out of curiosity. I didn't expect it to be really interesting, and I finished reading the whole book before I knew it. Later, during the summer vacation, I was bored and read all the books by that author."
"Earth Master"?
Li Shi was impressed.
He was about to search when Bai Mangmang sent another message: "I'll tell you quietly. In fact, I secretly wrote a book on the Internet. I wrote 80,000 words intermittently. I didn't tell anyone, not even my family. I know! (Hehe) (Shy)"
Li Shi was stunned at first.
There is a sense of absurdity that one suddenly realizes that the opponent is already at the end before he exerts any force.
Then it felt normal again.
Both she and I love reading, and such people often have a dream of being a writer.
In this Internet age where anyone can write, there are too many people who try to write online articles, such as my college classmate Liu Zhengdong.
Otherwise, the number of Internet writers who have written online articles would not be as high as 20 to 30 million.
He smiled and asked: "What's the name of the book? Which website is it posted on? I'll go check it out."
Bai Mangmang: "Do you really want to read it? I don't think what I wrote is very good. I'm a bit ashamed."
Seeing Li Shi wanting to see it, Bai Mangmang was hesitant.
Li Shi has also created, so she understands this feeling. After all, this is a private matter that she has always hidden. Showing it to herself is to show the most private thing in front of herself...
"I really want to see it!"
"Okay, let me show you. The book is called "The Only Handle of the Eternal Immortal Sword". It's on the Qidian Chinese website. After you read it, don't laugh at my bad writing."
Li Shi vowed: "I am not that kind of person!"
Click on the app, enter the name, and quickly search for this book.
"The author's name is actually 'Bai Gongzi Mangmang'. Comparing it with the QQ name 'Bai Mangmang', it's her at first glance. Adding 'Mongzi' seems a bit masculine, but that's right. Her book was published on the Qidian male channel. "
Li Shi read the introduction first, then clicked on the text and browsed quickly.
Of course, there is nothing to say about Bai Mangmang's writing style, which is condensed and sophisticated, with outstanding literary talent. It also writes about the theme of fairy tales, but the content style is still a bit traditional, whether it is the title, introduction, or the long description of the scenery and background in the opening chapter, it is very suitable for reading. For readers who are accustomed to online articles, this may not be very attractive.
It has a total of 85,000 words. It was completed two years ago and has not been signed.
After turning a few chapters, Li Shi originally planned to quit, but suddenly he saw a description of a special scene, and his eyes widened a little.
After the protagonist Sang Wen in the book obtained the most immortal sword "Purple Sky Sword", he used this sword to kill a snake demon for the first time, but unfortunately he was poisoned by the snake demon. The heroine and her widowed sister-in-law who were traveling with him saw the man. The Lord looked extremely uncomfortable and painful after being poisoned, and he couldn't bear it, so the two of them sacrificed themselves to detoxify him!
Tsk tsk!
Such a bloody and vulgar plot, under her excellent writing style, was actually written in a subtle way, but it made people's blood boil, and Li Shi's eyes went straight.
"This Teacher Bai, she is really...understanding."
"Moreover, the male protagonist is entrusted with the two women, and the relationship is still like that. Her inner world seems worthy of speculation."
Li Shi suddenly felt that Teacher Bai had huge potential in writing online articles. It would be a pity if she did not write online articles, which would be a loss for the entire industry.
I quickly flipped through more than a dozen chapters and saw several similar plots. I stopped and read it twice. I felt more and more responsible and necessary to "pull" such a potential writer into the place where he should have been. Come to her industry!
In the past two months, he discovered that although there are a lot of people on the Internet, there are actually very few authors and works that can attract him to read more.
After thinking about it, Li Shi logged into Qidian app with her QQ account, added her book to her bookshelf, and posted a few more comments.
Then he clicked on the QQ conversation interface and started typing: "Mang Mang, are you sure this is the first book you have written? You are not lying to me, are you?"
In a community in Jieyang, on the balcony of the master bedroom, Bai Mangming was lying on the sofa, her legs slightly curled up, outlining graceful curves. She pillowed on the edge of the couch, holding her mobile phone, waiting for Li Shi's feedback.
I felt a little uneasy inside.
This is really the first time she has shown someone what she secretly wrote online.
"Why does it feel like wearing a swimsuit to a beauty pageant and standing in front of the judges to be judged?"
Bai Mangmang stretched out his hand and smoothed the black hair on his left temple.
At this time, QQ rang, and she quickly picked it up and read it.
Seeing "Stubborn Stone" actually questioning himself, he immediately became anxious.
I quickly typed a reply: "Why am I lying to you? This is really my first time writing a book. I feel like I made a lot of rookie mistakes, and in the end I didn't even get signed."
Li Shi was waiting for her to say this.
"Is it so good to write the first book?"
"Except for not understanding the routines of online writing, you are excellent in all other aspects!!"
"Especially the writing style, which is much better than ordinary Internet writers!"
"And your descriptions of scenes are so delicate, and the details of ancient life are also very sophisticated. It's amazing. When I read your book, I can even see antique scenes in front of my eyes!!"
“I really like your writing style!!”
"Mang Mang, why don't you hurry up and start a new book? I can't wait to read your new work!!"
…
A series of exclamation marks bombarded Bai Mangmang directly.
She secretly wrote this book two years ago. Because she failed to sign a contract with the platform and no readers read it, she often felt very disappointed and lost.
I even doubted my writing ability for a while.
In writing, when has she ever enjoyed such treatment?
Facing Li Shi's series of rainbow farts, she suddenly felt that she had finally met a close reader and someone who understood her!
The depression hidden in my heart because of this experience suddenly dissipated.
Her heart felt numb and tingling, and she felt extremely comfortable.
Open a new book?
Bai Mangmang felt a little excited for a moment.
Otherwise, write another one?
But he soon hesitated.
If she were asked to write traditional articles, she would be confident, but if she were to write online articles, she would not.
Bai Mangmang: "Do you really think my book is good?"
Bai Mangmang: "But I can't even sign a contract. I feel like I don't know much about online writing."
Li Shi thought for a while and replied: "I have been watching the Internet for a long time. I started to contact it ten years ago. I have watched it more in the past few months and have also studied how to create. Your current situation is like A newly trained embroiderer, although she is very skillful and skillful, still doesn’t know what kind of embroidery patterns are popular in the market. As long as you understand the market, everything can be easily solved!”
Li Shi: "We can take our time and don't rush to write a work that will be popular. Let's first write a work that can be signed, and then pursue other works."
Li Shi: "Anyway, I will be your first reader and also your most loyal reader!!"
An embroiderer who doesn’t understand the market?
Bai Mangmang couldn't help but smile. He thought Li Shi's metaphor was very interesting. When he thought about it more deeply, he found it very reasonable.
Indeed, I mainly watch less online.
At this time, QQ rang again.
Li Shi: "And as long as you don't tell me, no one will know that you are writing online articles except me. Even if they know that you are writing, they don't know what you are writing or which book it is, so what are you afraid of?!! "
Bai Mangmang couldn't help but nod.
Yes, no one knows that I wrote it anyway. Besides, now that I have resigned and am staying at home, I can write openly and openly with the door closed!
After a while, she seemed to make up her mind.
Bai Mangmang: "Then I try to write another book? Anyway, I am idle."
Bai Mangmang: "But before writing this time, I have to read more online articles. Well, if I want to write, I still want to write about immortals, or historical fiction like "Qing Yu Nian", the original work of that drama I’ve also seen it, and I think it’s the type I can try.”
Bai Mangmang: "What do you think?"
Li Shi knew that she needed recognition at this moment, and immediately said: "Well, you have solid historical knowledge and good writing skills. I also think that in addition to fairy tales, you can also try historical writing! Anyway, I support you in whatever you write! These two types It just so happens that I like to watch it. (Smiley face)”
Bai Mangmang stood up with his two beautiful legs side by side, resting his head on his knees, folding his hands, holding his mobile phone, and a slightly excited smile appeared on his face. Sure enough, he also liked these two types.
Suddenly I felt my chest was a little tight, and I quickly straightened my back to make the distance between my body and legs wider, so that I could breathe more smoothly, and then typed: "Well, Nashi, if I want to write, you can keep writing to me. Be a staff officer?"
A smile appeared on Li Shi's lips again: "Of course, I can give you some suggestions now, and you can give me some advice."
Bai Mangmang asked quickly: "What suggestions do you have?"
Li Shi: "Take your previous book "The Only Handle of the Eternal Immortal Sword" as an example. You wrote a story about the protagonist who obtained the Zixiao Sword and grew up through the Zixiao Sword. The plot line of this story is actually good, and the overall plot is in line with the Internet. The protagonist in the article borrows the idea of upgrading from Goldfinger, but the writing is too traditional."
"If the starting point of creation changes slightly and starts from the idea of 'how to write so that readers will enjoy it more', then even if it is the same plot, it will be more popular with readers."
"The other thing about the book title and introduction is that I don't think it's attractive enough. It's better to choose a name based on the popular style. And the introduction shouldn't be too literary, it should be easy to understand, and write out the highlights and tips that attract readers. "
"For example, if the book is called "I Have a Zixiao Sword", it might be more popular among readers."
…
Bai Mangmang: "Yeah, I've written it down. I'll think about it carefully. Is there anything else?"
Li Shi suddenly remembered his "original intention", blinked and said: "The last point is the most important (Qiya), that is, no matter how you change, your writing has an advantage that must be maintained. For example, in Chapter 7, you describe The plot of the interaction between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is extremely well written, from the description of the scene to the atmosphere, especially the physical conflict between the characters during the interaction, the physical and mental feelings and changes brought about...that kind of vivid and accurate description , the delicate brushwork that makes people feel like they are inside must be carried forward.”
Um?
At first glance, Bai Mangmang didn't quite understand what Li Shi was talking about.
When did the male protagonist and female protagonist I wrote about have a physical conflict?
She suddenly thought of something, and quickly opened the app she had just reinstalled, found "The Only Handle of the Eternal Immortal Sword" written by herself, quickly turned the page, and quickly turned to the target chapter "Chapter 7 Killing the Snake Demon, Sang Wen is Poisoned".
The more he read the content, the blusher his face became.
And she also saw small bubbles at the end of certain paragraphs.
I clicked on one and found that it was a comment posted by a reader.
Stubborn Shi Chaoda: "The author's writing is so good that it made my blood boil!"
Well
The white and crystal-clear toes shrank subconsciously.
There is only one word difference between "The stone is super big" and "The stone is very big". If you look at the time of the comment, you can see that it was just posted.
That’s right, when I wrote it two years ago, there were no comments from readers.
Bai Mangmang took a screenshot and sent it to Li Shi: "Is this what you commented on? (rolling eyes)"
Li Shi did not deny it: "Yes, it's me. (Smiley face)"
Bai Mangmang: "Do you like watching this kind of plot?"
Li Shi: "Your writing is so good. It makes readers feel very immersive when reading it. Well, in layman's terms, it makes readers feel very good when reading it. (Haha)"
This is the advantage of online chatting. You can say anything bold directly. You can't see the other person's face anyway, so there is no embarrassment.
He didn't know that when Bai Mangmang saw his reply, his face turned crimson.
She felt like she hadn't been this shy in years.
After a while, a series of (head knocking) emoticons were sent.
Bai Mangmang: "(Humph) I didn't expect you to be such a stubborn person. It's so unruly."
...(End of chapter)
