"Comments, Replies and Summary"
Because the book's performance was very disappointing, I read all the comments today. After reading it, I felt dizzy. I couldn't write the words properly and had all kinds of distracting thoughts in my mind. It took me four or five hours to get rid of them. A chapter.
Then I thought, if I continue like this, the results of this book will be even worse, and I will even send it directly. No, this book has gone through many hardships and finally got to where it is today (I was pregnant for half a month during the Chinese New Year, and was crazy about getting married during the Chinese New Year) I'm dizzy, I've been dizzy for a week due to influenza A, and I'm worried about the company's layoffs...), I can't just send it like this, something must change!
So, here is this review reply and summary.
Summarizing the past is not only a reply to book friends, but also a self-clarification, with the purpose of making this book go further.
Forget about the good reviews, let’s just talk about the negative reviews.
Everyone's bad reviews can basically be divided into two aspects: few updates and unsatisfactory plot.
1. Few updates.
This is a fact. I admit that I only updated 110,000 words in March, which is pitiful. The 72,000 words I owe are still unpaid.
Objective reasons: interference from chores in reality; too much data checking; slow coding; the impact of changing the text after entering the dark room; etc.
Subjective reasons: entangled in the plot; passion fades; disturbed by negative reviews; depleted of inspiration; external temptations; etc.
Find problems and solve them. The objective reasons are difficult to solve at the moment. My next step is to start with the subjective aspects. From now on, I will no longer log in to QQ for code words, stay away from social groups, visit less forums, and read less comments. I will sort out the outline and details in advance, and only write according to my own ideas. ...In addition, resist external temptations and go out less often (except for blind dates).
Hopefully my changes will lead to renewed growth!
2. The plot is not satisfactory.
Every day when updating, some people leave comments saying that I am stupid, some people say that they want to watch the pretense and get slapped in the face, and some people comment that there are too many learning parts.
1. Regarding pretending to be slapped in the face:
To be honest, my initial definition of this book was "Shenhao's daily writing", and I warned myself to try to write as "realistically" as possible, and try not to write in a pretentious way...
Because of everyone's comments, I tried to change the plot, wanting to add some pretense and slap-in-the-face plots, but before I finished laying the groundwork, many Taoist friends said they didn't want to read it, and I changed the story several times overnight.
I have to admit that I am not good at writing about pretending to be slapped in the face. In fact, it may not be that fellow Taoists don’t want to see pretending to be slapped in the face, but I am not good at writing in this aspect.
In the future, I may try to write some plots that are pretentious but not slap in the face.
2. There are too many parts about learning.
Many comments said they didn't want to read the learning part. Alas, I was helpless too.
In fact, I have intentionally written less later on, but learning is the main line of the development of this book, so it is impossible for me not to write at all.
After thinking about it, I still have to write. In order not to affect the update speed, I can only write according to my own ideas in this regard in the future. If there are book friends who hate reading the learning part, I would like to say sorry in advance.
3. About water.
This is not pure water, it is water that can draw silk. 0.0
4. Regarding the protagonist’s life evolution.
As for the evolution of the protagonist, I am actually very entangled, because it is an urban life novel, and I thought that the protagonist should not evolve too fast, as that would easily lead to loss of control, but there are always friends who dislike the protagonist's slow evolution, alas. In this regard, I can only write at my own pace.
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In the new month, I hope it will be a month in which my updated word count increases.
I shamelessly ask all fellow Taoists to vote for me more, whether it is a monthly vote or a recommendation vote, every support you have will be the motivation for me to rekindle my passion, stay focused, and work hard to code!
I don’t dare to talk about long-term goals anymore, so I set a humble small goal first, six thousand words tomorrow.
If you can achieve 6,000 words tomorrow, let’s talk about the goal the day after tomorrow!
Finally, I hope my subscription data will come up.
above.
2023.3.31, I hope to get everyone’s encouragement and change the label of the 780 million handicapped party
