Let’s talk about “I” and “said” in suspense

Book lovers can review other novels. The word "dao" or the word "dao" appears too frequently. In fact, this way of writing is equivalent to an adult's appendix, which is of no use. Chapter 3 You can have a few "sayings" in a thousand words, which is better, but if there are too many, it will be easy to get confused and make dramas. There are many idioms that I have never dared to use because not all readers can understand them. Who has the time to look up the dictionary while reading? You can't. Moreover, when you listen to audio books, the actors will not keep saying these words. It's not that they are not in the script, but the actors know that saying this will make it look verbose and confusing. The reason for this is not to say that it will become popular after I change it, but firstly, I want to make progress and see my own shortcomings, secondly, to give the readers the best viewing experience, and thirdly, to give the actors a relaxing time. In the performance state, just conceiving the plot is not enough. You must consider clearly what the readers want, what the performance wants, and how to create the atmosphere. Only by thinking in this way can the work be like that.

"I" is a word that appears very frequently in the first person of suspense works. You must be able to use this word. If you can't use it, no matter how good the plot is, it will annoy the readers. This is something to think about. It does not mean that the first person The bad thing is that some people don’t know how to control the number of times my words are used, how to use them at critical times, and how to use them correctly. Only one or two words appear in a chapter of 3,000 words.

If I keep writing without looking back at my mistakes, I will never make progress. I will practice hard and refine it. It may seem like I am standing still, but this will be of great benefit to my future creations.