There was no update yesterday, so I would like to apologize to everyone.
The reason is quite simple. As I was writing yesterday, I suddenly realized that I seemed to be going the wrong way.
To be honest, this book is just a magic transformation story wrapped in HP cover. The characters we are familiar with are all there, but they all have a different life experience in AK Rowling's world. I wanted to write it at the beginning This is also an original set of HP leather.
To be honest, this kind of writing is the most unpopular way of writing. It is not a fan, nor is it original. It is not flattering to both ends.
But luckily, I have met you who can tolerate the shortcomings of this book, maybe because of the setting of the gun and wand, or maybe because you want to see the different lives of familiar characters. No matter what, you are willing to read this book. A great encouragement to me.
But I went the wrong way. The first mistake was that I didn't plan the plot of the first-year vacation in advance. This was an omission on my part. To be honest, this section was a bit poorly written, but I barely explained the pitfalls of the war group. And little things about the abyss.
The second mistake was the plot of the second grade. Lockhart being beheaded overnight was a bit abrupt, wasn't it? He originally had a plot, but when I was planning to write this part, I suddenly realized that I was just trying to get away with it. In the HP world, as I write, it becomes a fanfic that follows the 'main line'.
What can be written about Lockhart? He is just a clown. Even in JK Rowling's world, Lockhart has no necessary reason for existence, except for the "dueling performance" part, which makes Harry Parselmouth Apart from being exposed, he did not participate in more plot advancement. I personally think that this is the character that JK Rowling has crammed into the character. Maybe JK Rowling intends to use him to satirize something? I don't know this.
There is no need for such clowns in AK Rowling's world. In a world of war with gunfire blooming, there is no need for a sensationalist to waste a whole year.
In the outline, which is so crude that I can't bear to read it, the time left for Hogwarts is only four years at most. After the end of the second Triwizard Tournament, the 'use value' of Hogwarts will be gone. , Harry grew up too fast, and the monsters in the novice village were simply not enough for him to fight. Just like what was written in the plot of catching the werewolf, it was a boring, anticlimactic hunt.
Our real man Harry Potter, a muscular man with Glock tattooed on his forehead, needs to go to the battlefield of real men to shed his blood. I want to write him as the protagonist of the invincible style. Even the pretentious guy in Novice Village can't pretend to be complete. It's best to leave as soon as possible.
For the rationality of the plot, four years is a suitable time. By then, the members of the war group will basically have reached the sixth or seventh grade, and their combat effectiveness can be guaranteed. At least they will not hinder the protagonist and everyone can perform their best. own specialty.
I am redoing the outline of the plot for the second year and the following school years, wiping out all the original works as reasonably as possible, and spreading AK Rowling’s magical world.
Maybe it’s really because I’m too good at it. When it comes to originality, I stumble, but if I fall and get up again, I will always gain something.
At least after I finish writing this book, I can avoid repeating the same mistakes I made now when I start a new book.
Please forgive me for being naive.
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(End of chapter)
