Ask for leave and add questions to collect

If there is nothing else, I am still typing. I have finished writing the first chapter today, but I cannot post it for the time being.

Judging from the reactions yesterday and today, there seems to be something wrong with the plot. Everything else is trivial, but this is the big deal. I have to find out the problem and solve it, otherwise I won’t dare to write further.

The next plot will involve one of the two biggest design points of the book. Once the path is forked, problems will arise.

I was reluctant to ask for leave, so I took the leave to pursue my studies. . .

But I must take a moment, take a day. I will solve the problem today and update normally tomorrow.

If you are still reading and see something that makes you unhappy, can you guys give me some pointers? If you are really a newbie, sometimes you won’t even know there is a problem with the plot unless there is a problem. Even if you don't tell me if something goes wrong, I won't know.

If you continue writing without knowing there is a problem, big problems will accumulate over time.

Let me ask you, where did everyone start to feel bad? Which episode begins?

What makes you unhappy? Please give me some advice! ! ! Don't worry about the sequel, that's what I should worry about.

If you feel unhappy, just spray it out.

Spray it out, I can use it as a reference... If you don't tell me, I can only do it behind closed doors. . .

But please don’t curse...