There are only two small chapters today. I have opened a new volume and written them carefully.
I should have taken a leave of absence to sort it out thoroughly, but I didn't dare to take it. There was a mistake in the update two days ago and I owe three chapters. I can't justify asking for leave again...
I owed chapters in the past two days, and I didn’t say hello to one of them. The penalty of one chapter means I owe a total of four chapters (these are not counted as the extra chapters owed, and the leader’s extra chapters have not yet been paid).
The fines owed are all 3,000-word chapters, and I won’t fool around with 2,000 small chapters.
But now that I have opened a new volume, I will write a little slower and at the same time sort out the details.
After all, the heavenly tribulation has been overcome, the inheritance has been established, and the special training has been established. The Dragon Turtle can no longer be so weak, it's time to ignite, it's time to hit others, it's time to have some serious fun... But I don't want to have fun without thinking, so it's more brain-consuming.
Moreover, the third volume has the biggest hole in the book to be buried, and it must be buried quietly. It’s too much of a challenge for newbies. I wouldn’t dare to bury it if I hadn’t already written half a million words.
The second volume will be released at the end of March, and will be put on the shelves immediately, basically starting from the second volume. The first order on the shelves is only 1550, and the average order on the day is only 1100. The results are average. But around April 20, the average price broke through 3,000, and now it has been set at 3,500 for several days...
Long speed is still possible. It proves that the second volume is not bad. There is progress.
At least there was no more poison in the second volume.
However, there are also some shortcomings in the writing. The Qijue Secret Realm was not arranged well, the entrance was abrupt, and the plot was not delicate enough, which led to the loss of follow-up.
The second volume wasn't very impressive, but I learned a lot and knew what to avoid and what to write about in detail. For example, according to the original outline, the battle between Gu Luo and Qing Lei and the seven flying snakes will be written in detail. If it were written like that, it would commit the same problem as the first volume and steal the protagonist's role, so they only appear in half a chapter. Only the appearance of Xuanwu is shown, and the protagonist is arranged to be the narrator.
The battle between the Dragon Turtle Clan and the Soaring Snake Clan is also omitted... but it feels like it's a bit too concise. In fact, it could be written in half a chapter to a chapter. After all, after they appear, it is perfectly okay to stand on the side of the readers and let them show their holiness. If arranged, it can even be a small climax.
But I was afraid that it would be written like the Qingyuan War again, so I cut it out completely, which was not right either!
Mibu is a newbie, really a newbie. I’ve written it before but haven’t published it, so what does it count? Just enjoying yourself! When it comes to sending it out, I once sent one with 60,000 to 70,000 words, and then just let it go as I ran out of time. Doesn’t count as writing? Not even a pounce, not qualified to be called pounce...
Saying that you are a newbie is not to take credit, but to tell everyone that if you write poorly in some places, it is indeed due to lack of experience. You will always make progress if you write slowly. In the first volume, some friends were worried about the eunuch. Now that you have got the high-quality brands no matter what, you don’t have to worry about eunuchs, right?
The story is still long, let’s take our time. With 500,000 words, I have mastered some online writing skills, but it’s not enough! When we strive for a million words, the plot will really unfold and climax waves will begin, and we will be able to fully master the skills of online writing.
The third volume is very important, let me write it slowly. . .
In the third volume, the world view truly unfolds and the outer skin of the world is peeled off. Don’t be anxious. If you are anxious, you will make mistakes. If something goes wrong now, I am afraid that I will not be able to repair it and it will collapse.
I learned a lot in the first two volumes. Let’s write the third volume carefully and do our best to write it well!
In the past two months, I have had a lot of time, so I devoted myself to it. If I want to update, I will make a detailed outline in the past two days and then schedule it. It is now scheduled for 10pm at 4pm. These are two chapters of 4,000 words each. The plot is on track and I am writing quickly. I will update three chapters with 3,000 words at 3, 7 and 11 pm.
I tested it two days ago and found that an update of 8 to 9 thousand words can still be done. Any more will really affect the quality. Very influential!
But if one day the game crashes and there are fewer updates, please don’t blame me. Get the card back. Kavin feels really bad...
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