Probably because of the first wave of recommendations, I have gained a lot of new friends in the past two days. On the first day, I added 459 to my collection, and on the second day, I added 308. The results are average, maybe a little bad. But I am still very happy. In the past two days, people have made various comments and pointed out various shortcomings of this book.
I'm really happy. It proves that there are people who really like this book. Otherwise, I would just delete the book and not read it. Are you too busy to give me your opinions? The reason for giving me feedback is in the hope that I can improve myself and make the book even better.
I don’t know if I’m considered a newcomer, but I should generally be considered a newcomer, right? Newbies have limited abilities. When constructing a world, constructing many characters, there are too many details and too many settings, and it is inevitable that they cannot take into account them all.
In particular, this book is designed to be large. From the realm to the theory of techniques, to the structure of the world, the history of the world... I have set up too many things... It can be said that I haven't even scratched the surface yet!
After reading for more than ten years, I know a concept. The collapse of a book starts from the accumulation of various details. If you can't do the details in the early stage and the foundation is not laid well, it will be difficult to not collapse in the later stage.
So I’m really happy that people have come up with various opinions these days. If I have any objections or deficiencies, I can immediately revise them (unless it goes against my plan), once, ten times, or a hundred times. The more I revise, the more it will naturally become perfect.
Yesterday I removed a big poison from the first few chapters, so the new friends won't be able to see the poison. In fact, I don't know every poisonous point myself. I know it's poisonous, but I still write about it, and I feed you the poison. Am I crazy?
I'm trying to avoid this.
But I am a newcomer after all. It is inevitable that I will step into the river and accidentally go in. Everyone helps me.
I regard every reader who provides opinions as a teacher. Really, I seriously consider every opinion. If you don’t believe me, just take a look. As long as your opinions are not deliberately dug by me, I will basically patch them in the next chapter and the next chapter as quietly as possible. If there are really bugs, I will modify them in the original text.
But the progress of a writer does not happen in a day or two, nor does it take one thousand or two thousand words. The story is still very long, let’s write it slowly and improve it slowly. If you encounter something you don't like, please bear with it a little and don't smash the dining table if it becomes too salty or bland.
If something doesn't taste right, tell me and I'll change it! Even if one day you feel that this book is too rubbish and difficult to swallow, and you want to leave, just leave a message and tell me which plot or which chapters are too toxic. I can still check myself and make progress. ,right?
After all, after reading tens of thousands of words, isn’t it aggrieved to leave without leaving a message? Swear a few words before leaving! Maybe you can teach a mature author just by scolding me. Maybe one day you will be able to write a work that suits your taste, right?
Don't leave quietly!
I am terrified every day now, for fear that I will lose a few readers if I update a chapter - although this has not happened yet. I am proud to tell you that although this book has not been collected for a long time, it has not been dropped many times. From the beginning to now, almost no books have been dropped from the collection.
It proves that those who have collected it have no regrets and have not chosen the wrong book.
Well, this nonsense chapter has been updated now, maybe the collection will be dropped? Something else...
I can’t bear to let go of a collection, and I can’t bear to let you go as a reader.
Just like I have been murmuring in my mind for the past two days, the first reader of my book should be Erzhoumu Luo Xin. Not surprisingly, he also took away the Qidian coins I signed to invest. I saw him active every day in the first few days after publishing the book, but then he disappeared. I thought that what I wrote had deviated from the original intention, and he left quietly. Today he showed up to vote again. This kind of feeling of lost and found, really, haha I want to cry.
I cherish every reader. The first monthly ticket is Xiaodie's Xiaomiao, book friend 202205221912245553, and Beihai No Cat on the qq reading side, which has been rewarded by Jiewanton, Qishazen, book friend 2019308132024238 (Dear me, do you want it? Change your name to one that suits your temperament?)
Well, I looked through Writer’s Assistant while I was writing this…
I didn’t talk nonsense for a long time because I was so happy. I have only one purpose in writing this chapter, which is to tell everyone, don’t hold back what you have to say. If you write something bad, something poisonous, or something is lacking, you must leave a message to tell me. Whether it’s a chapter review or a book review, I won’t comment on it. Look at the fall!
You are training a boss who can become lv5 in the future. Do you know, dear? Take some responsibility!
